for you undergroundmuses           title - 14/15   Initially looking at your title, it gave me romantic and maybe angsty vibes. After discovering what genre your story really was, it gave me a slight surprise, which was refreshing since I don't get many new twists here on AFF nowadays. The title indeed connects with your overall story concept and story description, so that was very well done. However, the one point I deducted was due to the story being only in its second chapter; not showing much of how Taehyung would "kill for her" yet. Maybe if I am more knowledgeable on how their relationship progresses then I may have stronger feelings for the title. But that shouldn't discourage you, as the story is going excessively well so far.   story description 15/15   The description was short, but it was precise and succinct. Furthermore, your use of antithesis in just your description was enough to draw a reader in right on the spot. Your short description was short enough to create curiosity in readers but long enough to insert enough information for one to turn interested in the development of Taehyung and Jennie's relationship. That is well done. I don't quite understand the men part though, most likely because the story is just starting and there are more twists and turns?   plot development 25/30   I honestly cannot judge anything right now, as your story is only in its second chapter; the very beginning. But since I am reviewing your story as a whole, I deducted five points because to be very honest, I want to know more. I am very excited and curious for the next chapter. There is no ending yet, for sure, so I want to know what happens. Right now, the start is pretty smooth and steady since we are slowly but surely learning about Jennie and Taehyung's characteristics and personalities. The pace is going at a very articulate and well-balanced speed since Jennie's personality is already one that doesn't really think before speaking out too. The speed is matching with the characters' personalities so that is pleasurable. Also, your plot isn't one that is cliche, it is very original and very exhilarating to me. Good job!   characters 22/25   First of all, I want to point out how well you did in i