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CUPEEKEKEE
fabulous
fabulous
seo jinah
The Rich Kid
You could say I'm not really that tough with reviews and all. I may do criticize but blandly. Well actually, there's not really much to criticize when it comes to the plot because it's a cliche squad so their backgrounds are bound to be common. I can be, well, considerate with the grammar as long as the thought is clear. Overall, I'm just pretty much saying that I'm not scary or a perfectionista, I just correct things that may be a bit off or illogical. Might as well fill in some cracks too.
You could say I'm not really that tough with reviews and all. I may do criticize but blandly. Well actually, there's not really much to criticize when it comes to the plot because it's a cliche squad so their backgrounds are bound to be common. I can be, well, considerate with the grammar as long as the thought is clear. Overall, I'm just pretty much saying that I'm not scary or a perfectionista, I just correct things that may be a bit off or illogical. Might as well fill in some cracks too.
DIAMOND-BREAKER
pending
pending
moon seohee
The Aesthetic Celebrity
Aye wuddup first-one-to-submit gal (idrk what to call it but ey).
First off, I'd like to say that her personality is pretty much every pretty kid in the modern town. Those kind of drama girls where they're really really pretty but gets super insecure about themselves and thinks every positive comment of her was a lie and just throws it all off and cries. I think I have a bit of a route for her in mind and it would come pretty handy. Oh and props to you because Chaeyeon is a pretty good faceclaim for that kind of persona. Woop woop!
The background seems pretty much stable to me. The main points were given and I could see how the whole happy family turned to what-the-heck-we-were-doing-so-well-why. I could see a bit of similarity of her and Jinah as because money tore their family bonds resulting to be attatched with the squad. They could become pretty close. Oh and also I'd like it if you'd include how she was when coping up with requirements to graduate high school since her schedule is pretty busy because of her acting and modelling gigs.
And lastly, for the love interest part, I'm fine with pairing her up with another plotline but in case the gender count doesn't really match up, you could write a back up love interest for her.
That's pretty much it really. So far so good mate. I'll leave this pending for now.Thanks for applying! (btw, I really liked Chaeyeon's pinkeu hair days.)
Aye wuddup first-one-to-submit gal (idrk what to call it but ey).
First off, I'd like to say that her personality is pretty much every pretty kid in the modern town. Those kind of drama girls where they're really really pretty but gets super insecure about themselves and thinks every positive comment of her was a lie and just throws it all off and cries. I think I have a bit of a route for her in mind and it would come pretty handy. Oh and props to you because Chaeyeon is a pretty good faceclaim for that kind of persona. Woop woop!
The background seems pretty much stable to me. The main points were given and I could see how the whole happy family turned to what-the-heck-we-were-doing-so-well-why. I could see a bit of similarity of her and Jinah as because money tore their family bonds resulting to be attatched with the squad. They could become pretty close. Oh and also I'd like it if you'd include how she was when coping up with requirements to graduate high school since her schedule is pretty busy because of her acting and modelling gigs.
And lastly, for the love interest part, I'm fine with pairing her up with another plotline but in case the gender count doesn't really match up, you could write a back up love interest for her.
That's pretty much it really. So far so good mate. I'll leave this pending for now.Thanks for applying! (btw, I really liked Chaeyeon's pinkeu hair days.)
JISUNGSSI
accepted
accepted
im rowoon
The Tumblr Introvert
Ayo whats up fren (that create 99 tho lmao)
Okay so, his personality is pretty much down to earth and I like it. The whole description pretty much screams that he's the cool and smart kid of the squad. And the whole victim complex thing is pretty much almost everyone in social media. The kind of people that easily gets triggered and then everyone joins in boo train. Overall, he's pretty much relatable to modern day people.
As for the background, the main points were given so that's a pass. And I love me some childhood fren almost turned to lover but failed and became his enemy instead and dark stuff happened and then omg I meet him again. Y'know that kind of ish. I just pretty much don't have problems with the background.
As for the love interest part, it's nice to see an underrated broduce101 pair. I could say that Seyong's persona opens up paths your character could take and some fluffy scenes aha. We'll see what happens.
Thanks a lot for applying! I might actually at reviewing but as long as everything's good, the story shall go forth woop.
Ayo whats up fren (that create 99 tho lmao)
Okay so, his personality is pretty much down to earth and I like it. The whole description pretty much screams that he's the cool and smart kid of the squad. And the whole victim complex thing is pretty much almost everyone in social media. The kind of people that easily gets triggered and then everyone joins in boo train. Overall, he's pretty much relatable to modern day people.
As for the background, the main points were given so that's a pass. And I love me some childhood fren almost turned to lover but failed and became his enemy instead and dark stuff happened and then omg I meet him again. Y'know that kind of ish. I just pretty much don't have problems with the background.
As for the love interest part, it's nice to see an underrated broduce101 pair. I could say that Seyong's persona opens up paths your character could take and some fluffy scenes aha. We'll see what happens.
Thanks a lot for applying! I might actually at reviewing but as long as everything's good, the story shall go forth woop.
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