Chapter 1: Your story is so well written and the subject matter is something that comes up often. It's so unfortunate that so many people use and misquote the Bible to fit there own twisted views. The Bible is God's loving letter to his creation for them to read and benefit themselves. You will never read in the Bible that God hates gay people. What you will read is God is love and he has designed and desire all of his children to live in a way that will bring about the most benefit to us as humans here on earth. Now there are certain acts or behaviors that he tells us to avoid because of the consequences that could come from them. The same way a loving parent tells their children to not play with matches or to not cross the street by themselves. Why? Because if they don't listen it could end detrimental for that child. I just wish that people would take the time out to read the Bible for themselves and not listen or take the word of those who claim to know what it says. Knowledge is power and reading the Bible for yourself can bring about so much clarity, wisdom, happiness, and longevity here on this earth. Thanks for your very well written short story! I enjoyed it :)
Chapter 1: This is a good story. I have a lot of gay friends and family who live in the south and I can't imagine what they experience having the Bible shoved down their throats. I feel like your character is so realistic and relatable
Chapter 1: This is good. Really good. I felt all that anger Jordan felt when she overheard her mom's conversation over the phone. Maybe she knew from the beginning, maybe that scene changed her completely, we'll never know but everything shifted after that.
I love that you portrayed how the LGBT community was, and is still being, treated. It's like a disease and people are wary of them and stay away. Having AIDS is hard but Jordan's grandma was there for his brother.
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