Chapter 2: Waaaah! This is so gooood! I dont really like sad taeny fambam endings but it was well written for me so I like it. But still....SAD! STUPID TAENY ugh
Chapter 2: Ghaddammit. What went wrong? They were just inlove and being a happy family like the others. but that fcuking mom just had to ruin it all. I can't. Oh ghad. I need a fluff. (Btw thank you author-ssi c: *zooms out to go to your other fics lol*)
Chapter 2: This story has so much potential on getting featured, it'd be a waste not to continue writing it. Though I kinda think re - writing the second chap would be good. I don't know, it's you're story, so I won't judge. But as the fluffy parts we're good, the start of the angsty part was not that unique. Cause in a reader perspective, people would assume : "Oh,After that they'll suddenly meet eachother and.." blah blah, you get what I mean. A good way to make a story good is to make it as unique and making sense as possible. If it is like, I don't know,Taehyung became a corrupted vampire and the vampire queen/king takes Taehyung in order to make Taehyung possession as a means to inherit the throne. Knowing this by a simple letter, both Taeyeon and Tiffany use they're powers to find Taehyung. Tiffany doesn't know Taeyeon is a vampire hunter until later when the vampire queen/king reveals it to her. They both fight but Taeyeon is willing to die there. Just for Tiffany. And you make out the rest there. Please do consider continuing or remaking the story. It just has such a good potential just for it to go to waste. Thank you anyways for making this. Ciao!
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