Church's Walls

Description

Between the pale walls of church, and it is gloomy atmosphere I spent many years here search about myself, I search about myself between this lighted candles infront the sculpting jesus.

 The saint pats on my shoulder,and tells me

"you are doing good my son, you are a good model to all your colleagues in the monastery, I am proud of you,God bless you"

I accept my fate but my chilhood's dreams still hanging and the church's walls prevent it from flying away...

- Jung Dae Hyun-

 

 

Foreword

The main pair is BangDae-

this will be 12 chapters- I finished writing it

Warning : / swear words/ gays so if you are not comfortable with reading it please dont leave a bad comments

this is my first fanfic in English, english is my fourth language so if there are many mistakes please forgive me and bear with me

I hope you will enjoy reading it, and comments make me more than happy

 I will update when there is good response

I will leave you with some lines from the whole story

"who tells you that I did not reveal how I feel. I told God everything"

"his angelic face tempt me to be closer, when I am  few steps away from him he run away"

"Difficult to own him, but I bet my life to be mine in the end"

"I am afraid, please close the windows, I feel like someone observe us, also turn the lights off and close the curtains

I came to you. to confess somthing bad I did, because I can not move on, I lust my freind who I consider him as my brother, will my God  forgive me? for this sin

" It is two enjoyment the  first one to look at his eyes, and the second making love with frightened and confused angel,who trembles in my arms like a kid"

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lovelyairi
#1
Ooo I love these kinds of stories *^*
DaeYoyaku
#2
I just discovered this right now (*sigh* shame on me), really looking forward ( の •̀ ∀-)و
Kpoper18 #3
oh thr title is very good, and the some lines *the spoiler* is very amazing I could not wait to read the first chapter!
BaBy399
#4
it is sounds very good, I like the new theme! keep going fighting
wonhobabey #5
ahhhhhh im screaming
Aki_Hikari #6
Just from this few lines it seems dangerous and amazing. I can't wait.
NomDae
#7
Interesting concept indeed looking forward to it