DAKOTA
Description
She is a Dakota. Someone who is very kind, caring, sweet and notices all the good in me. The only person who makes me feel comfortable and free to be my ownself. - Him
They were everyone's favourite.
A perfect couple anyone could have ever seen.
They completed each other well like pieces of puzzle that fits perfectly.
She trusted him with her whole life, he protected her with everything he had.
She was his light of life, he was her knight in shining armour.
Problem is....
They cared too much for each other until they forgot to take care of themselves.
They started hurting their own self trying to protect one another.
And the perfect relationship they once had turned into a toxic one.
A complete destructive actions that made them struggling using their own palms to put pieces of them together.
He is a Dakota. A great fighter; unbreakable fighter in his own battlefield. He protects everything that matter to him. And most importantly, he protects me. - Her
Characters
Jung Eunyoung (25)
Lee Taeyong (27)
Ten Chittappon (25)
Foreword
Hi, this is baemaxy speaking!
After all this time being a lazy writer and a loyal aff reader, I finally decided to start writing again for good (i hope). I've been here since long time and i've read lots of good stories that pulled my will to write one so here I am, presenting you my first story here. Yeaay!
I only have write flash-fictions before so this is quite a challenge for me to write something thats more than 1000 words. I'm kind of worried that you might get bored even before the story completed but i guess it's worth to try, right? But honestly speaking, writing this is waaaay harder than writing flash-fictions. I got distracted a lot by having another ideas running through my mind while writing this story like thinking about what kind of story i should write next or should i change the plot of this story and blablabla but that's the fun in writing this, i guess. I mean, when i write flash-fictions i knew exactly where the plot is going and how i should end it cause there won't be more than one issue/ situation and i don't have to explain it in detail about how the ploblem occured or whatnot and usually i just write flash-fictions in one go but writing this needs mooore hardwork than what i've imagined before so writing this story gave me a complete different feeling.
Talking about this story, I chose Taeyong and Ten of NCT as the main cast here because there isn't much story about NCTxOC yet. I originally wanted Jaehyun to be one of the main cast but i guess Taeyong and Ten will portray the character better so i'm keeping Jaehyun for my next story. Yes, i'm working on another story, another 2 story to be exact HAHA. But don't worry, i'll be more focused to this one though. And oh! I almost forget to tell you that i'm not an english native speaker so i'm going to apologize in advance if there is any grammatical error. I'd be more appreciate it if you help to check and review it though, you can just tell me if there is something wrong in this story or if you have any question through the comment sections.Just tell me your opinion! It would help me a lot to improve my writing skills. Or if you just wanted to say hi or want to get to know me, do not hesitate to message me, i don't bite.
Last but not the least, i hope you enjoy this story as much as i enjoy writing it.
Cheers,
Baemaxy.
Find me on twitter: @baemaxy_
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