English is not my first language so please understand me if i use the wrong grammer or spelling. Please comment and let me know your thoughts about this. Hope you guys enjoy it.
Chapter 1: Well, it is understandable even though there are typos. You are brave for attempting to write this even though English isn't your first language. It's quite cute. A suggestion: do break up the longer paragraphs. It will make it easier. And if you want to fix some typos, I've found some easy ones:
fewer --> fever
Exact after 10 mints I saw JB hyung and Jinyoung hyung coming. --> Exactly after 10 minutes/mins
lets go --> let's go
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