Winter, Rain and Words

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I wrote a story for him. About him.

About how he loves winter.

About how he loves me.

--Lee Taemin, writer--

Foreword

This story written for kawaiikimbap's writing contest : Cold Hands, Warm Hearts.

I chose the fifth prompt :

"The color of springtime is in the flowers; the color of winter is in the imagination."

~Terri Guillemets

Credits for poster goes to MusicChibi at Ahjussi & Chicken Graphic Shop.

I'll go with oneshot, so here we go. Please comment to make a better me :)

From me, with <3

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OdetteSwan 940 streak #1
Chapter 1: This is poetry in prose. So simple yet so beautiful like those exquisite French films.
Thank you so much for writing it.
SHINee_fangirl_4ever #2
Chapter 1: soooo beautiful... =)
xxFallingRaynexx #3
Chapter 1: my gosh was this breath taking. it was so.. BEAUTIFUL. the way u described winter, with such a deeper meaning, it was amazing. just purely amazing.
kawaiikimbap #4
This is the first entry I've read. ^-^
Your grammar is rather unpolished, and because of that, the writing doesn't flow smoothly. The grammar would get you a two.
I really enjoyed the story. It's a beautiful idea, and some of the dialogue was pretty deep. The story would get you a four. ^^
One more thing...I hadn't really thought much about the meaning of that prompt. I just sort of assumed what it meant, but your story made me look a little deeper, and a different meaning occurred to me. You showed me that it could mean that the color of spring is obvious, and there's just as much color in winter...you just have to look a little deeper. <3

Your grade: 3 :)
SanaKyu #5
This is too lovely <3
SHINee4ever5 #6
It's breathtaking <333
Tchan11 #7
oMg !! amazing !!!
twomint #8
beautiful<3
shinee_ta05 #9
It's a great story.<br />
Hope you luck
yuchanisawesome #10
Aasjfsk so pretty ;v; I loved it so much!
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