donghae

The Man
Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

donghae

It’s a cold, cold day—winter has indeed settled over the city. Wind is blowing unrepentantly, strong and harsh, pushing Donghae to hide in the relative shelter of the nearest bus station. His eyes are red and tired, while the lower part of his face is hidden beneath a thick scarf. The small hairs at the back of his head stand up to attention when another drought hits him from all sides. Donghae shivers.

Above his head, clouds hold the threatening promise of rain. Or maybe is it snow? Donghae tucks his hands in his pockets, sighing. Thick condensation flows out through his parted lips and then fades quickly into the crispy air. With a small grimace, he sits down on the metal bench of the station. Another shudder cuts through him as he settles on the cold surface.

It’s maybe early, or maybe late. Donghae doesn’t have the strength to look up and check if it’s day or night; check when the next bus will come. He doesn’t even have the will to glance down at his watch. It’s cold and windy and the weather threatens to be gloomy all day long, and so he feels like acting sulky just a bit.

Faceless people go past and forth in front of him. Some are carrying briefcases, looking very important, and others shoulder heavy schoolbags. They’re frowning; sighing; looking much too stern. Donghae blinks. He wonders, i

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Kethryveris
#1
Chapter 1: Mélancolique et mignon.
PURPLEDREAM_girl #2
Chapter 2: Great!
shery_holic
#3
Chapter 2: Sort and simple but didn't cut down the fluffy inside this stories
vanillamyeolchi
#4
Chapter 2: It's lovely and it will make you feel hopeful that they will have their happy ending eventually.
bitterkitty
#5
Chapter 2: This is adorable in the saddest most hopeful way... I just keep thinking what will happen next. Will the bus come for hyukjae but he'll shake his head and remain on the bench with donghae? Will donghae miss his bus too, or will he leave so they can keep the magic of their brief time together intact? I wish I knew!! Lol I love how even your drabbles trigger my imagination. Thank you for sharing!
jewelhyuks #6
Chapter 2: This is so short and simple, but so good!
You succeeded in the slice-of-life feeling!
Had me thinking of what goes through the mind of the random people I meet when I'm out lol
VeronicaVaughn
#7
I think this is brilliant. It's so open-ended that it can go just about anywhere, but you kept it simple, which I think was a good decision. It's also kind of familiar, like it's something everyone has experienced at least once in their life. It's just a very small moment out of their lives, but it's meaningful. Usually I complain when things are too short, but the length is part of the stories charm. I really like it~!
HyukkiBear
#8
Chapter 2: I find it lovely. Little acts is so meaningful. Great :)
F5reverEunHae
#9
Chapter 2: Ooh this is really good!! It's so simple and it's quite beautiful!
F5reverEunHae
#10
Chapter 1: I like the flow/rhythm of this story!! *offtochaptertwo*