Elephant Skies

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Description

 

 

 

 

"They say that when an elephant cries, the heavens weep as well."

 

Pressed between the ocean and vast acres of forest ground emerges the small
town of Baima, a place of heavy spiritual healing and culture. It's famous for
its u
nrelenting rain and storms. Nakamoto Yuta, having moved there because the
air was more compatible with his weak heart, has found that he quite likes the
familiar scent of after rain.

 

She's beautiful, bold,

and everything he can't have.

 

                              

 

 

Foreword

 

 

 

[ note. this story will be located in a fictional
town in japan with elements of shintoism and 
japanese culture implemented in it. not all 
content is based off of real facts. some stuff
are purely fictional and made up by me for
the sake of the plot.]

 

 

 

 

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damnationSUruck
#1
Chapter 1: Aaah, I'm so glad I managed to stumble upon this fic! I've been meaning to search up Yuta and OC fan fictions (which are hard to come by, might I add), and was pleasantly surprised to see this one by chance after visiting another one of your stories.
So far, I must say all the first impressions this story gave me were really lovely. The title is so thought-provoking and wacky even, to some extent. An elephant sky? It paints an interesting image in my mind, and as a conceptual artist, I'm sort of smitten by it. The description is short and sweet and very pleasing to the eye. It definitely compelled me to read on, and chapter one did not disappoint! Yuta's circumstances so far is one I'd love to see explored, and Marina also had such a dramatic, memorable entrance. I'm curious to see her unravel as the story progresses, and hopefully I'll be able to leave another comment after checking out chapter two.
So far, though, so good! Nice job.
gemcat
#2
Chapter 2: damn i forgot to say the ending of this chapter was so smooth
gemcat
#3
Chapter 2: I REAAAAAAAAAAALLY LIKE IT.
just wanna say i think im in love with marina's temper ?? and once again, yuta is so cute, woh.
-roselynn-
#4
Chapter 2: ISU*$Y*QYR)*DIQOJOIY%RDU(@)R@DJQ
I think I'm as smitten over Marina as Yuta is, tbh. But seriously, that last bit of the chapter made me fall over with emotions.
-roselynn-
#5
Chapter 1: OKAY.

I love the prologue; Marina seems like such an interesting character and might I add I absolutely love your writing <333
Also, (I think you made your own graphics, correct?) the graphics for this story (and all your others) are gorgeous GAH I love your aesthetic
deathnoot #6
Chapter 1: I am actually ready to immerse myself in this and die from angst
gemcat
#7
Chapter 1: and i definitely love this prologue. i like your writing, and marina makes me curious ??? oh and btw, yuta IS so cute.
gemcat
#8
it seems interesting, looking forward to it !!