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    ☪TWILIGHT☪   SHOP   FStaff list   Staff List Press the picture to go to the staff profile        Username: inspiriterz Status: Available Experience: 1 year Position: Reviewer, Advertiser and Beta Reader. Genres im uncomfortable with: , yuri Message: Hello, i am inspiriterz, the owner of this shop. I have been reviewing for quite some time so no worries, you can put your trust in me. I mainly focus on sentence structure and i may be quite harsh with my reviews. I look forward to working with you.This shop is currently run be me only.     Username: 11thPhilanthropist Status: Available Experience: 1 year Position: Reviewer Preferred genre: Romance, fantasy and angst Genres uncomfortable with: and wolf!au

Message: I think I'm best at writing motivating reviews for the authors who has requested for one. I am an author too so I am aware of the anxiety it comes when one posts their story in an online community where thousands of people can have access on it. When I write my reviews, I focus on the flow of the story, the characterization and the central theme. Writing style is also a bonus. I do constructive criticism (also called sandwich commentary) so my reviews wouldn't turn to be somewhat a bash, but at the same time, it would also contain lots of details as to where the author can improve or/and what makes their story worth-reading. In addition, I write lengthy

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paula1988
#1
Hi do you do unfinished chapters as well?
FrozenInside
#2
I've always wonder why do people chose to exclude and/or yuri. Are you uncomfortable with the idea of two people of the same loving each other? I'm just genuinely curious.
oldest
#3
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itakiss
#4
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Profile Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1154158
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Poster Link: none
Story description: newly open fb based nonau roleplay, accept all ualities.
Status: freshly open
Characters: roleplayer
Genre: nonau fbrp
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『 x x 』imma keep this short and simple.
fbrp | nonau | allualities | new. give us a chance
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sheeiinewrites
#5
Chapter 1: Before I request, what is the difference between beta reader and review? I'm looking for a beta reading service that can read and critique my work before it is released and that is what the term "beta reading" is used for but a lot of people on here use the term for general reviewing, often after the story's published.
kpop_addict4ever
#6
Chapter 1: Username: kpop_addict4ever
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/725476
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1039873/taken-angst-drama-tragedy-memoryloss-alone-bts-taehyung
Story Title: Taken
Story Summary: Everything was taken away when he lost his memory. Taehyung tries to come back to his old life and find the things he left behind -- but how can he find eveything when he never knew they were gone?
Genre: angst/drama
Ratings: PG 13 (for the violence)
Status: completed
No. of chapters: 2
Anything else: Not really. I have had this story reviewed before and I did a lot of editing on it and now I think it's ready for me to do some more improving so thank you ahead of time for your critiques ^-^
mrbyunbaek_
#7
Chapter 1: Username: mrbyunbaek_
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Story Title: Kpop Hogwarts School roleplay
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Dear mr / miss ,

We are pleased to inform you that you have a place at kpop hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry. Please follow the school rules and how to join if you're interested via this link ; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/181123/ ; Your term will begin 2 days after you apply and got approved. See you very soon.

Yours sincerely,
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Status: open
Characters: roleplayers
Genre: magic
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JaegasmK
#8
Chapter 1: Beta reader (package 4)
Username: JaegasmK
Profile link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/569838
Story tittle: Run Away
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1196853
Genre: angst, romance, friendship
Story description: It has been 8 years since the 3-years long lawsuit battle between SM Entertainment and JYJ. It is high time they let the wound heal, for the sake of their 6 years of friendship. Let out all the bitterness they habor between them and stand on the same stage together again. However, it is easier said than done. Every decision they made weren't easy and the secrets they've kept for so long are not that simple.
Beta service: both is okay^^
Status: ongoing
Ratings: G (except for one chapter - slight R)
No of chapters: 15
pathless
#9
hey , do you accept ad for roleplay?