THE ONE IN LOVE

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He did nothing wrong
What he did only to fall in love
His first love
A very innocent love

He broke into pieces
He had no one

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nurazreen
#1
Chapter 1: At first I don't want to read this because I see character death and when I look at the comment make me really don't want to read.. But I got curious and I read it.. I'm regret cause it too sad, my tears fall and my heart feel hurt :(( why they do this to jinyoung? Mark's mom really devil.. Mark and other such idiot and too devil cause jinyoung.. Now jinyoung died nothing to say, jinyoung such an angel for helping mark.. After all what mark do to him.. This story gonna be one my favorite. And I think why good stories it's oneshot? Haha. Thanks author :))
Keykha #2
Chapter 1:
ReLif_53 #3
Chapter 1: Oh god.. I'm crying alot.
It's really hurt and angst..
But i love it.. So short..
Why u not make a long chapter like this..
Anyway, thanks for writing this authornim.. Just like we in the same mind that love jinyoung in pain but we do love him so much..
;(:(:)
cherreeeng11 #4
Chapter 1: I'm like TT :'( ... This makes me cry so muchhhhhhhh
JinyoungsMark #5
Chapter 1: This is soo sad :'(
Queenniepearl
#6
Chapter 1: OMG author-nim this made me cry so hard T.T I love your stories, and I saw your tweet that you want angst, but I didn't expect that you'll gonna make and upload it now HUHU. I didn't prepared myself to this. But you did great author-nim, please continue writing I love all your stories. Fighting !!!!
Kayiaa #7
Chapter 1: OMG, I cried so much, my poor Jinyoungie. So sad ;( ;(
ardzia #8
Chapter 1: Such a lovely sad story... I'm a crying mess right now... Huhuhu... Well done authornim...
Jinyoungnuna #9
Can't wait for this story