Chapter 1: You don't understand how much I love this particular ship that doesn't have many fics which is honestly a pity cuz it's so cute and could go to the other side.
Chapter 1: Yes, thank you. It's a huge pet peeve of mine when people write 15-17 year olds as absolute babies who know nothing about anything. It's ridiculously frustrating and demeaning, so I was beyond ecstatic when i read the story summary. The actual story itself did not disappoint. Mina is freakin hilarious in this, I love that whole section when you described everything that Mina did in order to defy Sejeong - it was great. Nayoung's role as the sane one only highlights the hilarity, I'm going to have to use 'Be free my child' one day, it's such a good line in this context.
Originally I kind of felt bad for Sohye because it sounds like Mina was practically preying on her, haha, but Sohye's not-so-innocent line at the end killed that thought completely. It was a fun little short, hopefully we'll see more funny shorts from you in the future, you're quite good at them ^_^
Chapter 1: Wow. I did not expect that at all lol. So.. since Mina is keen on defying everything Sejeong tells her..... I can probably make an accurate assumption on what happened next? Maybe? Anyways, I really liked this oneshot! Hope you write more Mina and Sohye in the future :)
Chapter 1: The last line had me screaming. Like.. What.. I felt like I've been living in a lie..? At least considering this fic. Your writing kills me. Like, a single kiss here is hotter than most of the rated fanfics in one. And maybe it's the fact that it's this pairing and I just knew that it's gonna be great.
Sigh.
Sejeong was just wow. The 'I'm gonna knock you back in last place' lol
Chapter 1: I'M CRYING!!
Mina is just too mischief n frantic mom sejeong yet carefree nayoung is perfect in one sentence including shy shy shy sohye lol
What a simple-great one shot here!
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