The Five Senses

Description

Sana and Tzuyu are together and in love. They’ve been spending every moment of every day together and they could not have been more happy. That was until Sana got electrocuted and developed a strange condition. Tzuyu and Sana’s heartwarming love story quickly became an unbelievable tragedy.

Foreword

Our two lovebirds have been living happily together for a very long time. One day, a storm entered their town. Sana, who had been holding onto a metal fence in her attempt to bring their wet clothes inside, was electrocuted when lightning struck the fence. She developed a strange condition ever since; her condition affected her more and more as time passed by. Ever since that unfortunate, stormy day,  Sana and Tzuyu’s lives have never been the same. Tzuyu and Sana live in fear as they attempt to continue their longtime romance. Not every storm ends with a rainbow.

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Thank you all for riding this short, emotional roller coaster with me. Again, I really appreciate all the views, subscriptions, comments, and upvotes! Thank you so much for reading The Five Senses! I’ll see you all on my next story~ ♥

 

Fun fact 1: I was originally going to make Tzuyu the one who got electrocuted, but my sister suggested Sana. I listened to her :P

Fun fact 2: I am not a medical professional. All the medical jargon I’ve used may not be correct. Obviously, this type of condition may not even exist, at least probably not to this extent.

Fun fact 3: I was going to add the rest of the Twice members into this story, but I quickly decided to make this story solely SaTzu (plus random doctor).

Fun fact 4: I never thought I would add song lyrics into a story, but “You Are My Sunshine” felt appropriate for this story. I will probably never add song lyrics to a story ever again.

Fun fact 5: I’m actually a bit worried that I may have disappointed many of you with the ending, but I really wanted it to end this way (for the story’s sake).

Fun fact 6: I may or may not have shed a tear writing the last chapter.

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Sequel for this story: The Next Life (click me) 
Read the sequel if you wanna know what happens in their next life (or if you just want to read about the crazy shenanigans they get into). It follows the story Tzuyu told Sana. It is on the fluffy/comedy side, so if you found this story utterly depressing maybe this will make up for that.
MagicalBeans
Thank you for reading The Five Senses! My only author's note for this story is on the foreword~ Please read it if you have the chance to! ♥

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areytrea #1
i'm five years a little too late but as someone who has an impaired sense of taste and smell i could literally feel what sana might be going through when she first found through out the first two chapters, you panic before anything else. and losing the sight must have been the end of panic for her, that's when she accepted it. and i think that's beautiful. tzuyu on the other hand, it must have been so damn hard to sign those papers, and to live her life after that. but i'm sure she pulled through, cause sana must have wanted her to and cause she deserves it.

thanks for the story, it's such a unique idea. i never imagined there to be a story like this. it's incredible.
SatzuLngSakalam
#2
Chapter 5: Omooooooo I literally cried wahhhhhhh it hurtsssssss.... Now I will read the sequel 😭🥺
saturouru
#3
I am once again, in tears
leeshymix
#4
Chapter 5: This fuccing hurt holy e i can't even >< my heart was heavy throughout and to think everything happened so fast, just wow 😭
twicesus09 #5
thank you author-nim for this! i had fun reading it at the same time broke my heart 😭 this story is everything 😭 and i'm going to read the sequel so the pain i am currently feeling will ease. great story! 💙💜
clingsatzu #6
Chapter 4: WHAT THE FUSBCKSNFKSNCKSNX AUTHOR NIM WHYYYY
Satzudaughter
#7
Chapter 5: It's 11 pm here and I am sobbing real hard, author nim whyy?? Huhuhu
Teudoongie1
#8
Chapter 5: I cried literally, sobbing, i hate youuuuu TT
Xxzakixx #9
This is the first satzu story ive read in aff and it definitely set my standard higher. God i love this fic
itcokey #10
Chapter 5: do you ever just put down your phone, then palm your face while tears running on your cheeks like a tsunami?

yup that’s what happened to me every moment tzuyu discovered that sana has lost one by one of her sense