Chapter 1: This is good. Really good. You nailed this, Author-nim! And it's understandable if you decide not to give this a follow-up, this is already amazing as it is. (Just don't forget to mark this as "Complete" hahaha) Good job! :)
i know that the ending insinuates that Tzuyu came back but really, when she was torn between being happy because Sana is and also hurt because she's not the one Sana's happy with is sooo heartbreaking. they were only running in circles and i felt too much pain for the kind of relationship they have. ah, my gosh. this is painfully good. can you perhaps make a sequel? either angst or fluff, not just open-ended because i feel like i went through a break-up and i might think about what happened between them until apparently twice receives their 20th daesang. jesus. pls.
Chapter 1: So sad.... Is it wrong if I ask for a sequel? Hahaha joke! I think just leave it with this ending. It fits the style of how you wrote the story. Good job author-nim!
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