Chapter 1: Omg I swear i giggled irl a couple too many times while reading this omg. SO CUTE. ahahah I love this. I thought there was going to be but I was in some ways glad that there wasn't. It was a lovely fluff piece :3
Chapter 1: first of all: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this was so cute oh my goodness.
even though i don't ship namjin, this was a very enjoyable read for a few reasons:
1. the characters. like. the reason i'm turned off of namjin so much is because seokjin is often overly feminine and just this overly passive and submissive person while namjoon is ult daddy™. the change of those stereotypes was such a welcome change of pace and i loved it so much, holy crap. namjoon was the awkward nerd that he really is while seokjin was the sass master he keeps fooling everyone into thinking that he isn't.
2. the writing, i love your style so much and despite the use of stage names being a pet peeve of mine, it was really easy to overlook because you draw people into it. it wasn't too fast and it wasn't drawn out, just the perfect amount for the pacing and i secretly added this to my bookmarks list under "guilty pleasures". haha.
3. the dialogue between them. it was so domestic and fluffy and so so cute. it's my weakness. "I'm going to hit you," Namjoon muttered under his breath as Jin lead the way to their bedroom. Unfortunately the man heard him.
"That's not very nice," he commented, finally letting go of Namjoon in order to find a small bag and their wallets.
this was my favourite snippet of their dialogue and IT'S SO ACCURATE TO THEIR IRL FRIENDSHIP because holy seokjin is so sneaky sassy it's great and namjoon isn't daddy in the way that most authours tend to write him as.
i could've probably made this better but i'm still high off of medication but i swear i love this story so much and i'm going to read all of your namjin fics now because of the way you write them. it's so refreshing that you don't make seokjin ult sub because he's cheeky as in real life and you show that in your writing. i love it so much and i love your writing anyway tbh. keep doin' you and i can't wait to see what you have in store next! ^^
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