Battu

Description

please don't stay in my heart once you're gone.

Foreword

Disclaimer: this is a story about fictional characters who are loosely based on the public personas of TWICE's members. Physical descriptions and names are used, and personalities are based entirely on a few caricaturised traits. The real people obviously have nothing to do with these characters.


“I’m sorry.”

“That’s alright. I don’t feel anymore.”

The moment of realisation was a crack. Mina realised, and she regretted until she decided it was true. The man’s expression faltered, as he looked about the perfectly clean room for an escape.

“I... oh. Well then...”

“Thank you for the audition,” Mina said with a bow as deep and long as she could manage. She turned and strode out, movements graceful, opening the door with the faintest of creaks and gently closing it behind her.

For a moment, her eyes rested on the polished wood of the door. It was a gentle colour, like caramel, warm-toned and light. It didn't match her frame of mind, but she wasn't petulant enough to be upset about something like that.

Not when her whole life had revolved around this, and this was only the thirteenth audition she'd failed. She nearly started shaking when she thought about her parents’ inevitable reactions. But that was for another day.

For now, she tore her eyes away from the little door of escapism, looking out at the open and cruel world that looked a lot like a quiet office setting. And then she made her way outside.

 


I really wanted to write something yesterday and I didn't have access to most of my stories so I chose to start something new. I spent a lot of time browsing this prompt thread and as much as I want to credit all the prompts that inspired me there's too many and I can't even find all of them, so just have a browse and check out the sources if you're in dire need of inspiration or something.

Anyway, I got inspired enough and sat down and wrote like 4 chapters and then went to bed and fell asleep thinking about ideas and woke up thinking about ideas and it was bad because I'm doing a totally different non-fanfiction story for NaNoWriMo whoops. But when I have time and I've hit my daily word goal for NaNo I'll probably be writing this one, so updates will be fairly steady, at least until they aren't lol. I know I have other ongoings to get on track with but ahh, so many stories and characters are existing in my brain and right now I'm just going to write the loudest ones.


Poster and background credits to Club X and Koffilatte! Don't they look lovely? <3

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SmolSanaisPomu
#1
Chapter 10: I wish you had finish this one...
MAYDAYY11
#2
Oh boy. It’s been a year since this has been updated but you’ve seemed incredibly passionate about this story, so I still hold the tiniest but of hope that you’ve just had a ton of writer’s block and haven’t abandoned this story.

2na is extremely rare to find, even rarer to find one that’s worth reading and coming back to read again and again. This is one of them, personally at least. I really enjoy the switching perspectives, Sana’s suddenly deep advice and her want to stick with Mina. The characterisation is just incredible and I find it really enjoyable to read this. Mina’s struggles, at least some of them I can relate with maybe not on that level but God the grades and worrying? On point. To be honest even if this didn’t have 2na I’d probably still read it. This is really great.
krina_love
#3
Chapter 10: i was really curious to know about mina's thoughts and you wrote about it, i think she will tell sana about what's going on her mind as time passes after all it's not easy to open it !
trshcn #4
Chapter 10: I missed reading this haha. I really enjoy mina's pov because of how contradicting the words she speaks and her thoughts. Huhu sana is making such an impact in her life and i know it is getting scary for mina, the emotions she is slowly showing is all thanks to sana. I hope sana can continually be there for her.
But i'm getting scared too of what mina's mother will do when she finds out all about these. Thank you thank you for the update author :)
rainbowfluff
#5
Chapter 10: Awww mina...I'm sure she'll eventually tell Sana what's on her mind. It's good to read about mina thoughts. Tysm for updating!
rainbowfluff
#6
Chapter 9: omg omg omg u updated!!! pls dont get discouraged as long u have the motivation to write we'll be there to support u :) im glad sana kinda sort out her feelings. poor mark but u cant force feelings. YAY MINA TEXTED HER :D that's a first for everything! tysm for updating <3
icyprincess123 #7
Chapter 9: Wew~ Thanks for updating authornim~ Another wonderful chapter!! Hahaha Sana must be feelinv guilt or smth haha and yay! Mina texted her!! I think thats a first lol btw dont be too discouraged authornim.. We understand (altho im just a new reader...) everyone gets a writer's block from time to time.. and i appreciate that you still try to update this fic. im really thankful for that. Just take your time and we'll wait for you~ hahaha Thanks again authornim~ ^^
icyprincess123 #8
Chapter 8: I can't believe i just stumbled on this amazing fic today... I LOVE IT AUTHOR NIM!! I read it one go hahaha I love how you built there characters. And how you paced the story slowly and everything.. Can't wait for the next update! (I initially thought that mark was nct's mark.. And that just sound so wrong... HAHAHA)
Luv-Ra #9
Chapter 8: I'm glad you came back <3 I really love your storie I'll be waiting for the next update
rainbowfluff
#10
Chapter 8: omg yesh this! im just glad u are able to update this <3 mina sud really listen to sana. tysm for updating!