My heart Kyu's POV

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This isn't really a sequel, but part 2 of "My Heart" It's written in Kyuhyun's POV, but honestly I made this so generalized by not using names that this could be about any pairing you want. 

Foreword

Unedited, hard draft, I just wanted to post this. I might, might make a part 3 that's actually a happy story. 

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Liza_Blessedx2 #1
Chapter 1: Oh my poor Yeye!!!!! Kyu, how could you cheat on him..how???? You didn't deserve him..... I hope he finds someone who won't break his heart and who will love him as he deserves to be loved . But oh my Kyusung heart hurts!!!
LongBanana #2
Chapter 1: Kyuhyun stupid!! ARGH!! You don't know how much I want to kill you!!
I hope Yesung goes with someone new.. but don't make Kyuhyun die first, he must see Yesung happy with the others
ilovesungyeollie #3
Chapter 1: no kyu don't answer the sea's calls. really kyu, you can only blame yourself for losing your yeye. but, but my kyusung heart ;;
Melodyewonkyu #4
Chapter 1: Because he play with fire then it's burn him in return.
But it's break Yeye's heart to knew all the time that Kyu cheat on him.
Devilcloud #5
Chapter 1: You deserve it Kyu really!
TheFanFicHoeX #6
Chapter 1: I hate cheating bastards. Seriously. Especially when they do it against someone who's good-hearted and amazing and has done nothing but love them.

Aish... It's early morning in here and I'm... Ugh!!!!!

I would have wanted Ye to give him a chance, but that thought of 'at least I have her right?' NO THAT'S NOT FREAKINRIGHT!!! His first thought should have been to get Yesung back with all his might! But because he didn't think that way, then he doesn't deserve a chance from him, unfortunately.

Yesung can move on.

(Oh shizzzzt, my kyusungheart. Damn, I need me some fluff)
FantasyWol #7
Chapter 1: I've never been much of an angsty type but lately I've been reading quite a lot...must be the bad period I'm experiencing...
Anyway, this was heartbreaking. I'm sad because they broke up and the girl left, but I'm happy Yesung did that because he deserved much better than someone who cheated on him. I do hope that what I thought he's doing at the end is not really what he's doing.
Nevertheless, both chapter were really, really well written and I really liked them. Good work!
fatimakys #8
Chapter 1: u deserve it kyu
fatimakys #9
ahhhh so it is angst too ! mmmmmm my day was angsty enough but it is ok to a bit more hahahahaha
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