Four

A Spark of Light
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Hoya awoke to a damp chill all over his body, and when he opened his eyes, he found himself surrounded by a thick, grey fog. He knew immediately that something was wrong, because he wasn't in a tree any longer, instead was on the hard, cold ground, and neither did he have his pack of belongings. Panic ran through him and he stood, a bit unsteady with the fog so thick as to make it hard to tell if he was upright or not. 

No weapon to defend himself, no supplies to warm or feed himself, and no idea how he had gotten into this predicament. An inexplicable urge to move ran through him, something that he tried to push away, because to move in this thick fog meant to chance injuring himself on the unseen world at his feet. But the urge persisted and grew stronger, and finally, he gave in.

He moved carefully, nudging his feet along the ground instead of lifting them, feeling for anything in front of him with his hands. He didn't know how long he did this snail like crawl, but when he was finally about ready to just give up and sit, the fog began to part. a heavy rain opened up above, and any piece of clothing or hair that had not yet given in to the persistent dampness of the fog was immediately soaked. The water cut like frozen knives into Hoya's body, and he hunched his shoulders as he wrapped his hands about himself. 

The rain did drive the fog down, though, and made moving easier, so he set off once again, this time just searching for somewhere he could get out of the downpour. He wasn't in a forest any longer, a fact that unnerved him almost as much as his strange awakening and missing belongings. The land about him was dark with night and the ground under his feet made of smooth, worn stone, as if people's feet had wore it down. He doubted he would find anything, and yet, there through the sheets of rain ahead of him, he spotted what seemed to be the glow of a fire.

Oh, a fire, he thought with longing, the chill in his body becoming more prominent in the forefront of his mind as he spotted the warmth ahead. The problem was, the fire would surely be tended by someone. He couldn't just walk up and expect them to share their camp, could he?

If only the world were as his father had been. Loving, kind, willing to share and help even if it meant going without. Hoya gave a roll of his cold, soaked shoulders, and

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 9: This story was just as good as I remembered and I loved the morals in each of the chapters. It was an interesting story and the way you portrayed the Light in different views and tests for Hoya were fantastic. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to reread it.
DGNA_Forever
#2
It's been four years since I last read this story, and now i get to read it again and maybe have a different perspective on it. Who knows? I look forward to it, regardless.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 9: This story was beautiful, and I love the way you described each shard differently and how Hoya learned from each of them. Now I see that throughout the entire trial, he was being tested and trained to be what the world needed most: the Light. The ending was perfect, too, and you wrapped this up nicely. Thank you for giving us a great story with such a powerful message to all♡.
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 6: Goodness! This monster gave me the creeps, but I did have to laugh at the beginning of the fight, because it reminded me of a Boss fight in a video game. I loved that, honestly!
The pain and compassion Hoya felt for the dying boy was great, but also sad. He will be undoubtedly rewarded for this act someday, and already WAS, in a way, with regaining compassion and the feeling to help people again. I think I know who this Light shard was, too. I think maybe Sungjong? He was who I imagined through it.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 5: After the kind way Hoya has treated people, it's nice to see it being recognized and rewarded, even if it's just in a warm meal and reassurance that there is still hope. Now he'll just have to BELIEVE in it. This was a great way to show the Light. I loved it♡.
DGNA_Forever
#6
Chapter 3: The way Hoya is trying to stay true to the Light is so wonderful and it's great to read him as one of the only good people left. I feel terrible for him, though. The betrayal he's gone through...I hope he can stay on the right path. Poor guy=(.
DGNA_Forever
#7
Chapter 1: Wow, this opened with a bang, didn't it? It's sad how quickly people will compromise and throw their values out. I hope all hope isn't lost already! Great beginning!
DGNA_Forever
#8
This sparks (no pun intended) so many questions, so I'm glad I can read it now!
contaminated
#9
Chapter 9: :o
So now, in the end, Hoya has become the Light? Or the Light has become Hoya? Or the Light has absorbed Hoya or something like that??? >.< this was a rollercoaster! D: I really enjoyed it though. (I'm just going to guess the injured boy was Sungjong.)