Chapter 1: Nice story authornim. I tend to prefer sad stories to mushy and lovey dovey ones. Next time you should put more feelings into the character. You should feel the pain while writing a story like this. Thats when you know the readers will feel it too.
Chapter 1: thank you for writing this story...so sad...why did jihyo keep it from jong kook about her sickness? this is really sad one...anyway thank you again for writing!
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