[SR] harahyejuseo1004

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PITCH: [18/25]

so let's start with the pitch. i don't really know who's who so i'll just be generic. overall you guys could maintain most of the main melody's pitch.

there are a lot of parts when you guys go a little flat compared to the original note. in the choruses, when you guys are singing higher and reaching for those notes, you don't quite reach it. in general, a lot of the longer notes that you hold go flat. especially around the second chorus and the higher notes at the end.

it's only slightly flat but enough for me to notice. i think the main problem is the inability to establish (?) the note you're aiming for when you're holding it out. pay closer attention to the notes your singing vs the notes your following when you record and you'll be stellar. 

also, i'm not sure which singer it is, but someone sounds like they're struggling to get to some of the higher notes. not musically, but technique wise. it sounds like you're trying to go up into a belt but by doing so, you're putting a lot of tension into your tongue and neck and the notes and voice are unclear. it might even make your throat hurt if you do it too hard. 

learning to release tension will really really improve your performance! (this sounds weird but clenching your actually really helps release tension haha)

DICTION/PRONUNCIATION: [17/20]

your pronunciation was fine, nothing to point out! i did not notice any mistakes! 

diction wise, there wasn't a lot of enunciation or phrasing that gave the song any personality. your power was distributed very evenly which made the delivery almost boring to listen

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shouvr
#1
I have requested! : ) i really need reviews for my cover because I'm on the edge to leave this world T___T
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Chapter 1: I have requested!

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IAMJUNESHOE
#3
Chapter 9: Hi, I requested a while ago! Are you able to tell me what song I used?
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#4
Chapter 1: i requested!
Chihoonie
#5
:c did my request get pushed back? Someone who applied after me got their review first x ( take your time though; theres no rush ^_^
amusingmurdermachine
#6
Chapter 8: I have made another request :)
amusingmurdermachine
#7
Chapter 8: Hi, thanks so much for the reviews!^^ I agree with most of your comments and I'll be sure to keep them in mind for my next covers~
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#8
I've requested :)
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#9
Chapter 7: This sounds interesting~~
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#10
ive requested~