Because I seem to always write more than i anticipate, I think it's a good idea to get in the habit of trying to write things that are a bit shorter...so call this an experiment then?
Chapter 8: AHAHAHA The last one-shot was utterly hilarious. I loved the last line where Changmin says "IT WAS ONE STRAWBERRY!" I can totally see that happening with Kyuhyun and Changmin though. Lol XD
Chapter 6: AAAAAAH YOU LITTLE WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU? Did you come back safely from your vacation? I sure did come back safely! I've missed you and I haven't even given you your letter ;A;
Btw, this chapter seriously is soooo cute! I now demand you to make some HAHAHAHA. I bet, if you ever write , it'll be more cute and sweet than it is hot XD I mean, you're the queen of KyuWook cuteness after all ;)
Chapter 8: *ack*...I reread all these drabbles in one go and now I'm dying from the cuteness overload...X0
But this latest one is by far, the sweetest and funniest one yet. I really love it when Kyuhyun can flaunt Ryeowook in other people's faces. Poor Changmin (one strawberry is still too many!)
Kyuwook's phone conversation was funny and natural, and I love that detail with Siwon's high fiving; like, by now he probably /does/ do it to annoy Ryeowook even in real life. My favorite part was their little "love off" at the end; Kyu's love just can't be topped X)
You slipped in so many tiny character details here, and I'm absolutely fawning over them! Thank you for updating and happy new yer to you too! May this be the year writer's block dies ^^
Chapter 5: Holy potato I know I have been too late with this comment but oh my goodness, all of your drabbles are just diabetes-inducing with its sweetness and adorableness! :'D
To be honest, for me, your drabbles are quite cliché. But you know what, these are the good kind of clichés--the ones where you can truly see how good the author is because the way she writes and constructs sentences make the whole cliché some sort of impactful cliché XD (Actually, I don't know what I am talking about right now, but I think you get my point haha.)
Among these 5 drabbles, my favorite is the fifth chapter. And really, the ending sentence just killed me and promptly resurrected me afterwards because asdfghjkl ♡ You know how I really value and anticipate ending sentences and your ending just gave me what I wanted to read. And only a few managed to do that feat enough for me to go "what the holy potato that was just mind boggling". XD
Thank you so much for these drabbles, and oh my cheesesticks I missed you so muuuuuuch!! ♡♡
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