Spark

Description

Jiyong felt as if he could pinpoint the moment his heart broke...

Foreword

This was a prompt that I started a while ago and decided was time for me to finish it. May be a little rushed, but I had to get it out before I abandoned it forever.

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bhoomika
#1
Chapter 1: This is so sad T_T
JiYhang_ReKwon #2
Chapter 1: my heart is clenching aaaaaa ㅠㅠ it's so realistic and the pain- THE PAIN IS OVERWHELMING I CANT EVEN-- :'( IZ SOOO GOOOD ARGH
peggyw #3
Chapter 1: Heartbreaking; so realistic- quite impressive
orenkiut
#4
Chapter 1: so saddddd.. yet so real. its life tho.
and they make it through..

great story! thankyou~~~
Reishel #5
Chapter 1: T.T T.T T.T T.T
batrox89 #6
Chapter 1: This was such a sad story, but I loved that it was so real. Thank you so much! :)
GDVIctory #7
Chapter 1: its so sad.. but the end is sweet tho :') aaanndd i hope you make mpreg fic more but with happy ending please hahah xD
yifantao #8
Chapter 1: It's really sad yet interesting to read about the both of them in this kind of situation. I can feel their pain. Also, I like how it ended. The ending kinds of makes me feel relieved I guess? :') u did a gud job *sends lots of love to u* write moreee mpreg pweaseee
sayangjaja
#9
Chapter 1: ah so sad...be strong ri..
VieViJie #10
Chapter 1: Again and again, i read fanfic nyongtory mpreg with sad ending.. Oh come on... By the way this story is great... I want more but happy ending.. So authornim please make new fanfic nyongtory mpreg with happy ending, that's my request hehe.. I will waiting for you... Fighting...