Do Kyungsoo is the silver streak amidst his grays and blues. Or alternatively, the story of how Kim Jongin falls in love and how he grows along the way.
Chapter 1: I just want to say thank you for creating such a real piece. It has this raw feeling to it that I still can't get over. It's been about thirty minutes since I finished reading this and I've just been thinking and rereading because truly, this story deserved my proper attention. The attention to time throughout this story, not just as a means to move the story, but as a critical element to the story is something that I adored in this piece. The idea that his feelings, while the same at the core, changed as he matured and progressed. The way he comes to acceptance and they come to a quiet acceptance not only of the reality but their love made my heart ache but smile. You put to words the reality of "right love, wrong time" and how wrong timing doesn't lead to a loss of love, rather that love can change over time as a person changes.
Chapter 1: just wanna say this actually made me a bit emotional last night before i went to bed, like oh my god? i mean, you know i don't usually read angst because it has this weird effect on me (tho i've got to admit i enjoy the torture every single time lol). also, i told you i have a different logic in real life. it's completely the opposite of what you've shown in this fic. but i loved it nonetheless! it was beautiful and realistic and i thought you did a good job.
Chapter 1: Okay... I'm crying. *Sniff* I'm better now. That was so moving and sad. I hate that we still live in a world where all types of love aren't accepted. You beautifully depicted how that can affect a person, stunting their lives. Jongin's determination to love on was just beautiful. Thanks for a great story!
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