At the Edge of a Petal

The Pretty Girl Beneath the Wild Peach Tree
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"It is at the Edge of a Petal that Love Waits" -- William Carlos Williams

 

 

 

Mina stepped out onto the sandy shore, breathed in a salty breath, and sorrowfully heaved yet another sigh. She did not want to be here. Not really, anyways. She agreed to come because her father had just been so eager when he came home from work two months ago with news of an opportunity to study practically untouched nature. She, being the “daddy’s girl” that she was, encouraged her father to go. After all, Mina loved him. Mister Myoui certainly was a character, and he was committed to his life’s work. The quirky man worked as a professor at a small college in Kobe for years, and he threw himself into learning anything related to biology. Even their house was filled to the brim with his latest studies.

 

Mina liked this, though. She loved the potted plants clumsily placed wherever leaves could reach a ray of sunlight, and she loved the cheerful whistles and songs of small birds that managed to become the background of their life.

 

Mina did not like, on the contrary, having to leave her comfortable situation for outdoor camping with complete strangers. She didn’t like that she couldn’t just walk a minute down the dusty country road to visit her classmates. She didn’t like that she most likely will not drink her favorite tea for half of a year. She didn’t like that she was about to be stranded in an unfamiliar place with no one she trusts to rely on. This “untouched nature” that she has been dragged to discover was simply too painfully far from home.

 

The small makeshift camp was nearly completed by the time Mina managed to drag her pair of bulky carpet bags through the unkempt tropical brush. It seemed happy enough, she thought. Firewood lay stacked near a small open spot in the forest

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I will update soon probably this weekend. Sorry guys; school started and it has been rough.. >.

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KarlaA1198 #1
Chapter 3: Muy bueno xd
reallylily
#2
Chapter 3: Am I able to cry--
ByunPenguin
#3
Chapter 3: Ani,MiMo is real it's just that they don't have any moments on cam because they have their intimate moments at their dorm and they want their relationship to be a secret. Nice update!
domokunlovesyou
#4
Chapter 3: i don't ship mimo as I am a hardcore michaeng shipper, but I guess I have a small part in my poor heart that is reserved for this ship. dagnabbit. this is cute and fluffy and i want updates to flow continuously like a waterfall in the middle of the forest, please and thank you. kidding! take your time in updating! i'll be waiting! i loved this and would love to read more. :)
TakuyaKen
#5
Chapter 3: kekeke dont be y mina
hani88 #6
Chapter 2: I could not stop grinning. You have the perfect amount of descriptions without making it cheesy, but you can paint a great scenery. Keep it up!
TaeNyLover0108 #7
Honestly this is so freaking cute I wanna cry!!! I can't wait to see how this story develops!!! I love it!
reallylily
#8
Chapter 2: IM NOY CRYUINF OR ANYTHONG
ByunPenguin
#9
Chapter 2: Cute! Love it!!!
TakuyaKen
#10
Chapter 2: cute hehehe