Tales of Astora: Legacy

Description

This is a series of multiples books compiled together. Currently Book 1 is still ongoing:

Book 1 (ongoing):

Over the course of time, countless heroes have risen to defeat the demon lord. Their names, recorded in history. Tales of their achievements are known across the land. But what about the demon lords who have fallen? What of their side of the stories?

One such tale is about a young boy born of Dark. What would he do now that all the powers of the old demon lords of the past belong to him? Would he pursue the path of Dark he was destined to? Or would he reach out to the Light at the cost of his own life? There is no other path. And yet he seeks it, insatiably.

Book 2 (in process of story development):

Foreword

The story will mainly focus on the interaction of a young boy and the rest of the world. As more characters appear, we will have much more point of views from different characters and not just the MC. 

There are also a lot of mysteries in this story, with many clues that may seem out of place or strange or simply illogical in the context but these will be explained in time so I ask for your patience. Some details can appear not important at first but have a high chance to be crucial in a much latter chapter for example. This is my first attempt for writing a novel so I actively seek your comments and opinions that could help me improve my story and to give you a bette reading experience.

necrophedius
I am new to the website and this is my first attempt of writing a novel. If you don't mind, please leave some comments and tell me your opinions about it :)

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WiTTyFF #1
Chapter 119: Wow, I'm in awe from reading this story! I have to admit there was several scenes that I had cried on, but there was also moments I felt happiness while reading. Your style of writing is very pleasant to the eyes!

I thank you for writing this amazing work and I hope to see the next!
lonergirl
#2
Chapter 2: Before anything elsez I just want to say, thabk goodness I found this story, my type of genre, i hope its completed though
Realmz #3
Chapter 113: Ah decoding the weird alphabet messages making my head hurts XD

FORSAKEN DAUGHTER OF THE VOID
WE ARE COMING FOR YOU
THE BLOOD OF THE GREAT ONE
TO REVEAL THE HIDDEN TRUTH OF ORIGIN

ABANDONNED CHILD OF THE COSMOS
OUR CHILD
MY DAUGHTER LILITH

Now... this has something to do with lilith?!
BabyHyun96 #4
Chapter 4: The last time I checked, it's around chap 70 and now, woah! Have you finish written it or? x)
BabyHyun96 #5
Chapter 2: it seems the boy was connected to the doll somehow.. o.O gonna continue the next chapter!
BabyHyun96 #6
Chapter 1: This looks like a very promising story. Gonna stay subscribed and read it til the end. :)
Tho i am abit disappointed that there's no idols in it but the whole story is totally my cup of tea. Good luck with writing and expect comments from me ;)
aishimasu
#7
Does this involve any idols?Because there's no idol name in the characters section or in the tags. I've read the prologue and i'm curious to know before continuing. I can see this as a MAMA au xD.
JustAnotherYear
#8
Chapter 1: Wow this is really good and it's only just the prologue! Can't wait to learn more about these characters and where the story takes them!! XD Great job :D