Chapter 9: Btw. After celestial, I'm all for a boy band~

I love this chapter. It shows so much of the girls and can't wait to see the other girls calls~

Chapter 9: I think it's cute to see who the first person the girls go to are after finding out such big news - it really tells us more about them. I'm guessing Vernon will be receiving a phone call soon haha

Chapter 9: Reread it.. and STILL caught some typos. whatever...

Hurry up and write the other girls!! But loved the chance to see how the girls were with their oppa/eonnie. Excellent as always!

Oh. my vote? after celestial, make a boy band!!! YES!

Chapter 9: Awwwnn the girls were so cute. Hyomin ended calling Hyosung and I think she couldn't have chose someone better x3 That unnie knows exactly what she's feeling. And I had to laugh when she asked about Junhong. I have the feeling he will get really happy too.
And Dami is also close to her older bro! <3 It was so cute that he imediately thought about how to reach SM buildings xD This was the "younger sister-older siblings" chapter haha but I think their reactions were really close to the truth. Dami-ah, don't worry. You have your unnies with you!
In the next chapter, I guess Hanmi will call her brother, and the other girls will call some of their parents? XD

Chapter 8: OOH~ future red velvet interactions~
Man, definitely could feel the excitement the girls were feeling!
The girls interaction with each other is so cute and touching. They definitely care for each other.

Chapter 8: This was a nice surprise! I'm loving the way the girls are so close. Can't wait to see what happens next!

btw, he can keep beta'ing -laughs-

Chapter 8: Aaaaahhhhh I was tense alongside the girls!!!! And I internally jumped and screamed with them!!
For what I got from their personalities, their reactions were just so right!! XD And I was so touched at the younger girls supporting Hyomin ;w;
They will live with RV yey! X3
Aahh I really am loving this. The way you write really portray the characters' feelings. n.n

Chapter 6: omg, Hanmi is so adorable XD
To be honest, they're all adorable and I'm definitely liking it so far.
I already see ships among the girls hohohoho. I definitely see Hyomin and Hanbi being like the parent ship lol
Bickering out of love while their baby Dami is like ....why are you guys fighting over food?
Great start and good flow!

Btw to add my two cents to the fanclub name. Stars has my vote. I think it matches very well. Similar to what say_the_name said, each girl is a point of a star, but it's the fans that make them whole in a sense. As cheesy as it sounds

Chapter 6: I feel like Gen and Hanmi are clore because they are the american duo of the group xD And don't worry Gen, you will won over hangul! x3
Still talking about Gen, thank god she knows how to cook! I was already getting worried for the girls for when they would live in a dorm! If Gen needs help, I volunteer Hyomin to help and learn how to cook too! xD lol She will be the leader after all.
I bet Hanmi will be the one that talk the most in iterviews and programs xD And at first I was worried about Hyomin's personality but then it showed how she was really the mother making the other girls calm down and even helping Sojung with her jacket -squeals-
I liked that Dami is the level headed maknae! It's different from the overly cute usual maknaes, so that will be a plus for the group! x3 By the way, I'm already -sisterhood- shipping Hyomin and Hanbi and Dami as their child LOL -run- Gen and Hanmi would be the other sister-ship and they would be Dami's aunts lol -run-
Talking about Hanbi, I'm totally up for the friendship between the two rappers! x3 <3 And... huuuuum what's up between her and Chanyeol??? xD

Chapter 6: That was a great start. It makes me all excited to read more. I don't remember. Did the other girls you mentioned; were they made up or were they other applicants? Just curious.

(I'm sorry I was MIA and wasn't here to beta!! So there are a few typos but otherwise it's great!!)