Slow, Slow

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Unbelievable, Taemin thought.  Unbelievably cheesy.  He shook his head as he began wiping down the counter again.  “That’s not honest—you’re just drunk,” he sighed.

Jonghyun grabbed Taemin’s wrist, stilling his hand from his redundant cleaning.  “--can’t it be both?” he asked with a smooth smile.

Foreword

'I feel

you wanna take it slowly

Slow, slow.'

 

 

It flustered Taemin to hear their banter called ‘flirting,’ though there might have been some clout to it.  For months he had admired the pianist for all the skills he’d displayed—piano, song, words, charm. . . Then, after every show, Jonghyun would come to the bar and ask for a review of the show.  Naturally, Taemin had nothing but praise to share, but he always tried to sound as objective as possible with the limited knowledge of music he had.  And so, given he thought he’d covered his crush well, it felt too forward to refer to it as ‘flirting.’  

 

 


A/N: In which Jongtae talk a lot about cheese, smol Jjong gets drunk rather quickly, and Taemin struggles to make a move. . . AKA, the 50 millionth fanfic based around Jonghyun's Cocktail.  A piece written purely to exercise my writing. All fluff, nothing fancy aside from the one-too many descriptive words. I am too liberal with my self-indulging. 

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4____nobody____4 #1
Chapter 1: This was amazing.Ugh,I wish I could write like you *^*
IllusionLi #2
Chapter 1: I think it's the first time I leave a comment here on AFF but I really really liked your one shot, I like that it has a lot of descriptions and it feels really sophisticated (even though I needed to look up a lot of the words to know the meaning cause my english is not that good lol). I think you portrayed really well their emotions, everything felt smooth and beautiful. I love JT so much and your one shot makes me love them even more! You're seriously a really good writer, gotta subscribe to you :D!
ying9202 #3
Chapter 1: (TRYING NOT TO SCREAM OUT LOAD AGAIN FROM ANOTHER AWESOME FIC)
(OH BUT IM ALREADY SHOUTING....)
(BUT ANYWAY THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS)
(I LOVE THIS SO MUCH SOOOOO MUCH THEY ARE SO CUTE)
problematictrash
#4
Chapter 1: so im gonna refrain from screaming in all-caps because that would take away from how ing taken (for lack of a better word) I am by this. I believe one of the hardest things in writing, specifically and especially in fanfiction, is getting the characters and their personalities to flow properly with the story (in fanfic's case, matching them with their irl counterparts). Words cannot express how perfectly you captured Jonghyun (and Taemin too, even though this was sorta centered around the former), and I'm so unbelievably impressed !! Everything about this was flawless, I have no idea whAt you're talking about, hunty I've seen messy, I've written messy myself, and this is as far from it as you can get. Seriously, this was so eloquently written, I'm still so shook after reading this masterpiece. (And I, a Space Gay, adore all the cosmic metaphors and mentions of stars.)
Anyways, I love everything about this fic, you did Jonghyun's cheesy and fake-deep ((that's a joke ! I'm kidding ! I do understand that that was the whole point of this ! that cheesiness isn't a flaw !)) and it will forever be one of my all time favs <33
nberbers
#5
Chapter 1: This is beautifully written. Love the fact Jonghyun gets drunk to confess lol
HiddenByTheWayside
#6
Chapter 1: WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU YOUR WRITING SLAYS OH MY DEAR GOD I'M EMBARASSED FOR MYSELF CURRENTLY BECAUSE YOU'VE ACTUALLY READ MY OMG WTH BUT HEY I KNEW THIS WOULD BE GOOD - INTERESTING PEOPPLE BREED INTERESTING WRITINGS

No, but really though, your writing style is so sophisticated. You use description and your vocabulary wonderfully, without the interesting words becoming over-bearing. And even though it was just a short snippet, it was remarkably cute, and felt like I'd actually read something a lot longer, because of the thoughts it departed. This was so nice :3 I'm jealous! Your writing is <3