luminous and wired

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Description

in a world where technology is causing the deterioration of communication, two people find themselves connected in more ways than one.

Foreword

it all started with a typo.

normally, people wouldn’t really respond to wrong numbers or mistyped emails.

but for park jimin and jeon jungkook, that wasn’t the case.

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chuuki #1
Chapter 1: Awww so cutee!
ReinaPea #2
Chapter 1: Awww cutee :))
narixxx #3
Awww.. I really love this story
AbsoluteHominy #4
Chapter 1: This was cute. I like the line about the safari in their stomachs. I wish their was a little bit more detail and for certain scenes to be written as if they were happing instead of being pharaphased, especially the kiss scene. Like instead of "when Jungkook pulls him back into a kiss." Perhaps: Jimin tries to run but Jungkook doesn't let him, tugging on their entwined hands and holding the redhead in place. Jimin's eyes went wide, but didn't have time to think as gentle fingers touched his cheek and soft lips lightly pressed against his. His thumping heart was echoing in his ears as Jungkook's lips started to pull away, and Jimin's hands shot foward hugging the younger boy close and returning his kiss...yada yada. Of course this is just my opinion, but for me the extra details really get me into the story. Anyway I really liked the who'll idea of jikook meeting up, and am really curious as to what will happen to them from this point on. ^^
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