Let's throw in some sugar

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Youngjin is growing tired of his routine of work, work and more work, One day his life begins to change when he sees and falls for a guy named Zica. He begs his little brother for help on winning his heart

Foreword

DOES MY TITLE EVEN MAKE SENSE i couldn't think of anything atm sorry so it may change when i add the first chapter 

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LeaveTheRingInTheTar #1
Chapter 3: Yes yes yes opening few lines of conversation between Eddy and Simba I can so hear it in their voices
mmmm Eddy's fit bae.... how terrible that I like that a lot
IRL Yul would like to shank Simba with a nametag lets be real here
Poor Loud Child Simba screaming about cakes-- poor Yul and Zica having to serve him. OMG THE POINTING AT THE CHAIR I DIED PPL HAD TO ASK WHAT I WAS LAUGHING AT
Desperate Eddy and Pathetic Simba it perfect-- I also hope Prince breaks Eddy
chokes instead of complimenting when giving cake come on Simba come one Zica is trying here too jesus-- I like that Yul is terrifying to SImba tho, this is good this is how it should be irl (i think irl Yul wishes Simba was terrified of him)
Simba you idiot Eddy told you to compliment him you said you were gonna compliment him and he even asked for a compliment and what did you NOT DO?

Again cute chapter, I really think your style and general level of writing has improved from the first chapter, it was cool to see! Proud of you! I'm looking forward to finding out what dumb things Simba does next! and if Mak broke Eddy!
LeaveTheRingInTheTar #2
Chapter 2: Hadon "pretends" to be asleep: I mean it is Simba so...
OMG MR SWEET BUNS I GIGGLED HOW PERFECTLY SIMBA HOW TERRIBLE- and accurate that Sancheong wishes to perish
what is this idiot game of catching marshmallows with his mouth I feel like yes Simba is obviously very good at that (but was it for every catch he had a question answered?) It a cute game tho dang (but their poor broken belongings)
I love the how close to Yul explaination it works so well
I also love "Does he dance to girl group songs like me?" -- so dumb so Simba
This was a cute chapter! I enjoyed it!
VixxenWolf #3
Chapter 3: I have to edit this the format I didn't notice the italics disappear but I don't have time to do it till maybe Friday night cause of work ;; I may not read as well without them
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