( ` ELUSIVE。)

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doyoung is a lot of things but the one thing he can't be is jaehyun's.

Foreword

 

 

 

elusive.

well it's me, going so weak in the knees.

thinking of falling asleep looking in your eyes.

but right now, i'm finding it hard to make out,

which word i somehow left out, because of that smile.

but baby don't be so elusive, i'm trying so hard to refute this.

and every night i dream this dream of you.

- gentle bones -

 

 

❋ dedicated to my tokki anon on tumblr. made with my tumblr challenge in mind.

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gmont18 #1
Sorry for suddenly upvoting so much of your stuff and subscribing and unsubscribing but you are a great writer, it's dark but beautiful and deep. I like it. Ps. I'll get through the rest at some point believe me.
icysummer #2
Chapter 1: This is so sad yet so beautiful! ❤
bunhunhan #3
Chapter 1: wow this fic got to me im emotional
DalkhomanKojimal #4
Chapter 1: This too beautiful. The best Dojae fic I've read. Please write more
Beth22_woofie #5
Chapter 1: have turned all dreamy after reading this
i feel like am in Doyoung's shoes.
angsty and dark with a mixture of poetic sentences have got to be the best writing style based on my preferences,, and I totally find you endlessly amazing..
Doyoung isn't my bias but you tend to make me see him as such he is the most beautiful artwork..
this soulless chr story is another proof.
the portray of the beauty of darkness

i wish you luck..lots of'em
Uri_WH97 #6
Chapter 1: omg Doyoung ahhhhh why ㅠㅠ poor Jaehyun... sighs. But at least I know they're ing so I'm okay hehe.
I kinda understand why Doyoung doesn't date. He's afraid of getting hurt. But bruh you're hurting Jaehyun here ASDFGHJKL!

Anyways I can't help wishing that this story would be a chaptered one bc I love this ;; (I LOVE EVERY STORY OF YOURS) I wonder if Doyoung ever loved Jaehyun more than a friend :c
Procrastinating_Me #7
Chapter 1: This is so beautiful and the ending is just...
It's like a reality check, really, cuz we all might have that something we want but we know we can never have it.
And the way you write is really beautiful. Praises really can't do justice on your writing.
youdontknowme272 #8
Chapter 1: Gosh this was aaddening at the end. Doyoung is a flipping savage. A savage I tell you. I feel somewhat sordy for Jaehyun.
Elfshairamae #9
Chapter 1: I've run out of praises already. Wait,I'll come back later ..... /exits
Haneul97 #10
Chapter 1: This is a new style you're pushing to us and with every sentence I can discover a new talent you're revealing. Doyoung's personality here is art. And you described it very beautifully. It was confusing at first how they seemed so close yet so apart I couldn't tell if they were in love but it started coming all together by the end. I truly loved it and I love your writing style most <3
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