Stoplight

Description

They both waited for the light to turn red. But only one of them walked ahead while the other one stayed.

Foreword

Thanks to Daneyed for Beta Reading my story ^^

 

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CheriLane #1
Chapter 1: This was an amazing story. Thank you for sharing it!
NoonaYoung
#2
Chapter 1: Oh my, the ending is sooo....(okay, I'm going to spoil it).
Starting a relationship is easy but maintaining and sustaining it is hard. This applies to the OC in this story. Some may say her decision is wrong but when we are put in her shoes, we may do the same as well. The way to included flashbacks in between lines is good as we can understand what led them to where they are now. And may I suggest a sequel to this?
simple99girl #3
My god... That's amazing..
It was soooo emotional...
Thank you so much for writing such an amazing oneshot like that.
I felt every single word you wrote right there.. Really thank you.
Isabella37 #4
Chapter 1: This story is so descriptive!! I like how you describe every single flashbacks they're having. It's quite sad though not seeing them having a happy ending.
prod_GLEE
#5
Chapter 1: Guess I'm the only one who doesn't like the OC's way of thinking. I wish she put more effort on their relationship. Yoongi never gave a sign of being tired of their relationship. I felt like she should be always supporting him.
Of course, as the previous commenters said. it's realistic. look how famous they have become. no girl on earth would bare it, I guess.
Yoong10
#6
Chapter 1: This fanfic is a lot more descriptive than most of the other ones I've read. I also really like your writing style because it's easy to understand and it's just how I like it. This fanfic was also a lot more realistic than most others, and I enjoyed that. I love reading fairy tale like fanfics, but when realistic ones comes once in a while, I really enjoy reading those. I also really liked the metaphor. How the stop light represents, or sybolizes their relationship. How when the green light goes back on, and it shows that their relationship can't go back to the way it was before. Yoongi has to wait for another chance (the next red light) And the one thing she says to Yoongi just makes everything perfect. Saying "It's too late not only shows that the green light already went on and Yoongi can cross the street anymore, but also symbolizes that their relationship is too late. Maybe if he had reached out to her earlier, things could have been different, but it's too late. Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this, and I hope you write more fanfics like this!
fefedove
#7
Chapter 1: i've read a couple of stories like this before, but this was one very realistic and relatable. not too dramatic, which is good, in my opinion.
you write descriptively too, but sometimes i feel like the sentences are too choppy. a lot of the sentences start the same way (she did this. she did that. etc) and you tell instead of showing.
but this was still a good read. thank you for writing this!
Mimimimmimim #8
Chapter 1: This was really descriptive and not too sad and also very realistic so I like it very much ^_^
I honestly wish there was more realustic fanfics out there. Its not like when u seeyour ex from five years ago, theres this dramatuc conversation and you guys either hate each other m9re or whatever and then somehow u meet up again after that and blah blah blah. This was a one time thing and it was awkward. REALISTIC
FrozenInside
#9
Chapter 1: Lol, I wasn't even close to what really happened haha. This was good to read. It didn't leave me heartbroken, which is good I didn't want to be too sad. It was just a really enjoyable read. It's nice how you talked about Yoongi's feelings and what he truest feels towards his fans and her. Tbh, I couldn't help but blame her because of what happened. I felt like she shouldn't be so sad because she's the one that called it off. But then it's also true that she called it off because of how busy he had become. No one wants to be in a relationship where their significant other doesn't have time for them. So I understand in a way how she feels. It's sad. I understand why she was so bitter when that old guy flirted with the banker, haha.
Anyway, sad story but a really good read.
Thank you for writing this! :)