slho901 - I need you

Reaction to Amber's On my own
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Note that I was pondering a fair bit if I should share this cos it gets pretty senstive. But I loved to share just as I share my stories to you.


I want to give thanks to HIM for giving me all the ideas to write this and would dedicate this song to HIM. Of cos I respects all other beliefs. ^_^ Definitely, definitely, definitely, of cos to all of you who can relate to this song.

 

 

Though it might not be as good as orginal, but I still want to rewrite some portions to make it my own version.
Cos Amber version is really really really good that this songs touches my heart despite of listening to it more than hundreds of times. I saw many people posting online on reaction of this song and this is my version of reaction.

 

Play the video, look at the lyrics in AFF here and sing along. ^_^


 

The edited song is titled

 

slho901 - I need you
edited from f(AMBER) – On My Own in bold
on 21 May 2016

 

It’s okay it’s okay
I’ll lie and say It’s okay
So long I’ve been seeking your face

 

It’s okay it’s okay
You whisper through gentle breeze
Washing away the hurts through your rain
Telling me to be strong


That's why I look up
desiring to find you
I know I'm safe in your embrace
I pray each and every day
For me to stay sober
‘Cause I’m weak on my own
I need you


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doremon1364 #1
Chapter 1: Dear author nim it is wonderfully edited into your version. Both Amber and yours does has their own meanings. Really touched by both songs. Hang on there, whatever, wherever and whenever life brings HE will always be there for all of us!!
doremon1364 #2
Chapter 1: Dear author nim it is wonderfully edited into your version. Both Amber and yours does has their own meanings. Really touched by both songs. Hang on there, whatever, wherever life brings HE will always be there for all of us!!
doremon1364 #3
Chapter 1: Dear author nim it is wonderfully edited into your version. Both Amber Mas yours does has their own meanings. Really touched by both songs. Hang on there, whatever, wherever life brings HE will always be there for all of us!!
doremon1364 #4
Chapter 1: Dear author in, it is wonderfully edited into your version. Both Amber Mas yours does has their own meanings. Really touched by both songs. Hang on there, whatever, wherever life brings HE will always be there for all of us!!
InfiniteCosmos_ #5
Chapter 1: I love when you edit songs.. they're always amazing! Maybe I could your edited lyrics into my drafted story somehow.. We'll see hehe

Anyways, time to get dragged to go shopping. Byee and 43~ <3
iya_007 #6
Chapter 1: Its a sad song....i think she is trying to be strong on her own but on the other side she really need someone to be there for her and support her....and that someone is nowhere to be found. So she is kinda lost and alone...hoping that someone will coming back for her and rescue her....

I hope its just me and my thoughts...she is a multitalented...i bet she will be a great star :D
Leonicograce #7
Chapter 1: Thx for sharing this...nice lyrics!! Agree with u.... In my opinion: Amber will continue her life's stories through songs.. She releases all her songs 1 by 1 but all will be summed up in 1 story - her life's struggles and victories. First i also feels sad when i hear n enjoy d song, but again i remember that she has her family n fans who always support her n pray for her, so that she can be strong as always. And if i see all her pics, she really is enjoying her every moments! : D
fankry #8
Chapter 1: Uuu niceee
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