Disturbia

Description

 

It’s like a thief in the night, coming out of nowhere and grabs you whenever you are alone. Like toxic, it'll suffocate you until you can no longer breathe. It can creep inside you and then consumes you from within. Like shadow, lingering in the dark, watching you. It’s like a disease in your mind, incurable as it slowly controls you.  I call it...

 

 

Disturbia.

 

 

 

Author's Note: Hey guys, I really wanted to write something about SHINee and I got inspited by Lucifer and RingDingDong. But after a long time of thinking, I've decided to write a short story about them. This story is inspired by both songs but I'm going to make a little twist to it. It's not an average Lucifer and Ring Ding Dong story you guys read here in AFF. In fact, it has nothing to do with both songs. It's just that the 'dark' theme of both songs inspired me to write something darker. So I hope I'll be able to pull it off.

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Credits to LOVISM Graphics Shop for the poster.

Foreword

 

There’s a creature inside me, a stranger who claims she is a part of me, waiting to be unleash, to break free from my secret door.

She hides in a dark room inside my heart, a secret haven that I myself didn’t know a thing of.

Well, not until they found me…

 

Ring Ding Dong.

 

They’re here.

They’re always around, lingering in the shadows, waiting for me to be alone so that they can whisper in my ears.

They’re waiting for the day I give in, waiting for me to come to them, waiting for the day when I finally let myself go, waiting for me to say those three words…

 

 

Ring Ding Dong.

Ring Ding Dong.

Ring Ding Dong .

Ring Ding Dong.

 

 

 

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Teaser.

 

“Just say those three words and you can be free.” I heard him whisper. “You want to be free, right Eun Joo?” I flinched as he spoke of my name. “Be free. Be with me.” He continued, his whisper was soft, as if dancing gently into my ears. There was a sudden softness in his eyes when he said that, as though he really cared for me. There was even a slight moment when I wish I could just fall into his arms and let go of everything. “Just say the magic word.”

“Ring Ding Dong…” the five of them chanted together, their voices echoing in my ears as the figures in the mirror faded away.

 

NO!

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BadOppa
#1
Oh. My. Gosh. Talk about creepy. The description and teaser both sound amazing~<br />
But... The foreword? It's like a little bell in my ear, possibly a little girl saying the words over and over again. Really, this is a great idea.<br />
Update soon!
sweetieheart2
#2
dunno if i'm "awesome" enough in writing though :S
sweetieheart2
#3
this looks really interesting! :D<br />
and how active are you going to be with this story? :) *considering co-author*
jeunefleur #4
Hey! Your plot looks interesting. I'm expecting your first chapter ^^.