Without you

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About broken hearts, falling in love and rekindling old loves. 

 

This is an OT3, a request...

Its ing long too LOL (I say long - I'm posting in three chapters, but it is around 23,000 words in total^^; was meant to be a oneshot oops).

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myownsaviour #1
Chapter 3: I am at loss for words. So heartbreaking in the end...I really hoped they would be together for the rest of their lives T.T
minatsuki
#2
Chapter 3: everything was going so perfect but why a sad ending ....
lemonew
#3
Chapter 3: I believe that Jonghyun actually want them to be together <3
LOL.
Just like their real traits :)
Jonghyun would care for people secretly.
xgetyourswagx #4
Chapter 3: was suprised to see onjongho fic on here but this was pretty good despite it not being a happy ending.
MememememeME #5
Chapter 3: I think Jonghyun died which is sad :( but it's even sadder thinking that he just left them :[ I'm a fan of both Onho and Jongho so them all being together was perfect? XD the way you wrote it made me think that was the best when they were together and happy so when Onew and Minho die they will all be together again!!!! XDDDD and a happy ending (just let me dream XD)
bimilline
#6
@ YuuChanJR ;__; it wasn't my intention to make it seem like Onho forgot Jjong. I'm sorry you didn't like the ending ;_; but I'm an Onho fan so its kind of difficult I guess for me to write Jongho convincingly :/! Sorry for making you cry :(
Thank you for commenting anyway^^; I appreciate you telling me :)!

@ Meeghan94 ^^; thank you for liking it! And :P I won't say whether Jjong died or not sorry XD! It's up to you :)
YuuChanJR
#7
Sorry but.. I can't help but dislike the "Onho" Couple here. Don't misunderstand me. The Story is... well not what I wanted but it was good and I really like the way you write but Onew and Minho just didn't seem to care that much about Jonghyun. I mean, he was gone and they were just like "Oh he'll come back. Let's wait and see. As long as you're here I don't need him. He's just a year away but well whatever." I might just think that because I love "Jongho". Ah... I don't know. The ending just made me cry because I thought of Jonghyun dying and the way Onho seemed to me. x_x
orenjijunsu
#8
That was so beautiful... ohmygosh. Did Jjong really run away or did he die? This... this was just too good
bimilline
#9
@ erodedfiction<br />
o__o thank you so much? o__o! I am so glad you liked it? :D <br />
No problem~ it was a request so I felt obliged to share it :/ but thank you this comment really made my day! ^^;