My Everything: series.

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Hello eveybody!!

I'm back with another update. This time I will be writing short drabbles/ one-shots about Youngjae and Jaebum ('cause if you've already read my previous first story, you'll actually know by now that I'm a hardcore 2jae shipper). And the reason why I am not writing something long it's because I'm still working on my writing skills as well as my english abilities to describe everything, hence I am just writing short stories instead of long ones.

Well, let's talk about this fanfiction. 

This idea came to my mind while listening to 'My everything' by Ariana Grande, then I thought this songs carried a strong emotional messeage, so I decided right there I would write something based on the emotions they provoke on me. I am interested in to write and explore different scenarios, and hopefully I'll fulfil yours and mine desires on 2jae stories.

Being this all, hope to read about you soon on my next update, so please stay tuned for it!!

love y'all!! <3

 

P.S: I am taking some time to develop the first story, so it'll take me some time to update but I'll come to you no matter what!! :)

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Defarae #1
Chapter 6: Dear authornim...
I am very exited with your sequel and still waiting till now.
I hope an update soon ?
Stay safe and healty authornim
givemepizza #2
Chapter 2: Thank goodness our precious 2jae reincarnated and finally got to find happiness. Their moment in Youngjae's cell was so sweet and then th story got so sad again when JB went to war with king corpse. I don't know much about life in the BC but slaying for freedom, betrayal, war and selfish authorities sounds a lot like what life was like then. I'm very impressed by your story telling of the era.
The part where JB and Youngjae die together holding hands is so heart breaking. That's why the ending where they finally break free and finally find love is so beautiful. As always the emotional rollercoaster here is amazing.
Describing fight scenes can be hard but you did a decent job of it. Not bad at all.
Overall this is a good story.
I can't stop smiling at the image of Youngjae and JB in loin clothes:-D
givemepizza #3
Chapter 6: Hi, Mr. Felopoh. Always good to hear from you. I totally understand how work and personal issues can get in the way of our beloved hobbies. I also have some personal issues that have left me with no zeal to write or read fanfiction. I want to but I just can't, so I probably won't be sharing anything any time soon either. We can only hope for a better day and I'm so happy to her that you are finally coming to a place where you are ready to write something. Time is a problem, yes but at least you have the drive and ideas. We Truely appreciate your effort even going to bed thinking of how to deliver quality stories for us:D
I'm eagerly waiting for a sequal to just a little bit of your heart but I'd also like you to take your time and take it easy. We'll be here ready to read whenever it's ready. Life can be so stressful, so I hope you can find some ways to relax when your work isn't crushing you.
Finally, I'm happy to hear that you are considering touching other AUs and concepts. Growth in any area is always a great thing. I wish you all the very best. Remember to have fun always cause our writing is about fun:D
Stay safe too and take great, great care ❤️
givemepizza #4
Chapter 6: Hi, Mr. Felopoh. Always good to hear from you. I totally understand how work and personal issues can get in the way of our beloved hobbies. I also have some personal issues that have left me with no zeal to write or read fanfiction. I want to but I just can't, so I probably won't be sharing anything any time soon either. We can only hope for a better day and I'm so happy to her that you are finally coming to a place where you are ready to write something. Time is a problem, yes but at least you have the drive and ideas. We Truely appreciate your effort even going to bed thinking of how to deliver quality stories for us:D
I'm eagerly waiting for a sequal to just a little bit of your heart but I'd also like you to take your time and take it easy. We'll be here ready to read whenever it's ready. Life can be so stressful, so I hope you can find some ways to relax when your work isn't crushing you.
Finally, I'm happy to hear that you are considering touching other AUs and concepts. Growth in any area is always a great thing. I wish you all the very best. Remember to have fun always cause our writing is about fun:D
Stay safe too and take great, great care ❤️
BlockBBTSHinee #5
Chapter 4: Oh my gosh! Sorry for taking so long to read the stories. But oh my gosh! They were so good. I found Problem to be cute and amusing. It was a refreshing story. But Love Me Harder! That...was intense. I really don’t know what to say. But I enjoyed it. The more I read it the sadder I became, because they weren’t together. They would’ve made such a cute couple. But surprise!!! I was not expecting that twist. Ugh it made me so happy I wish I could’ve read more. I think this one is one of my favorites. Please keep up the good work. I can’t wait to read the next one!
BlockBBTSHinee #6
Chapter 4: Oh my gosh! Sorry for taking so long to read the stories. But oh my gosh! They were so good. I found Problem to be cute and amusing. It was a refreshing story. But Love Me Harder! That...was intense. I really don’t know what to say. But I enjoyed it. The more I read it the sadder I became, because they weren’t together. They would’ve made such a cute couple. But surprise!!! I was not expecting that twist. Ugh it made me so happy I wish I could’ve read more. I think this one is one of my favorites. Please keep up the good work. I can’t wait to read the next one!
BlockBBTSHinee #7
Chapter 2: Awe these stories are so good! Just a Little Bit of Your Heart broke my heart T.T but it was so well-written. I love how you portrayed Youngjae’s emotions, I could feel his pain. I had tiny hope toward the end that they’d stay together but then JB left and ughhh. It was still amazing.
I love One Last Time. It was really sweet. I was nervous that JB wasn’t going to win the fight but it he did! But it still ended up sad but at the same time sweet. I was not expecting them to end up together in the future/present day but that was such an amazing idea. I couldn’t stop smiling. These were really well written stories. I can’t wait to read the rest!
givemepizza #8
Chapter 1: Oh my Gosh this is so so sad. My heart broke so hard at the end there. Poor Youngjae. No o want to smack JB so hard in the face. Aside from that, I admire your writing skills *chef's kiss*. For me the best is the kind that focuses more of their feelings and emotions than the action itself- and that's what you did in this story. Okay yes your English isn't very good as it's not your first language but still I can tell you are a great writer. You are so great at describing emotion. From beginning to end of this story we walked with Youngjae and u deratand each painful emotion he felt. The story is a Youngjae POV but just from the way your described how JB has been treating Jae lately, I was able to understand what JB must have been feeling as well. Another thing I loved here is the way you describe aorroundings e.g the weather and how it's affection a character. I'm not so good at that. Literally your strengths are my weaknesses in writing. I'm bad at writing , describing deep emotion, and describing sorroundings. Those are things you are great at. Overall I enjoyed this story so much even though the ending made me so sad. I hope you don't give up writing in English❤️❤️ wish I could read your work written in Spanish.
I comment some more as I read your other stories here
givemepizza #9
Chapter 1: Oh my Gosh this is so so sad. My heart broke so hard at the end there. Poor Youngjae. No o want to smack JB so hard in the face. Aside from that, I admire your writing skills *chef's kiss*. For me the best is the kind that focuses more of their feelings and emotions than the action itself- and that's what you did in this story. Okay yes your English isn't very good as it's not your first language but still I can tell you are a great writer. You are so great at describing emotion. From beginning to end of this story we walked with Youngjae and u deratand each painful emotion he felt. The story is a Youngjae POV but just from the way your described how JB has been treating Jae lately, I was able to understand what JB must have been feeling as well. Another thing I loved here is the way you describe aorroundings e.g the weather and how it's affection a character. I'm not so good at that. Literally your strengths are my weaknesses in writing. I'm bad at writing , describing deep emotion, and describing sorroundings. Those are things you are great at. Overall I enjoyed this story so much even though the ending made me so sad. I hope you don't give up writing in English❤️❤️ wish I could read your work written in Spanish.
I comment some more as I read your other stories here
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