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ESCAPE
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I am running and running but the hallway seems to get longer and longer, he thought.

 

While running, the young adult looked out of the broken windows, that lined the left side of the corridor, into the starry night. The full moon shone and illuminated the usually pitch black hallway. Without a pause he ran forward albeit he felt like he was about to throw up because of the rotten stench that polluted the air in the abandoned hospital.

 

Just where is the exit?! He was exasperated.

His pace got slower because his legs began to feel as heavy as lead. He couldn't continue anymore.

 

*tap* *tap*

 

A noise. The boy heard something. “What was that?” he mumbled to himself. “Maybe my mind is just playing tricks on me. I should really get out of this hell.” He went on.

 

*tap* *tap* *tap*

 

No, the petite boy didn’t imagine that. That’s for sure. Where does it come from?

He walked prudently, all the while looking over his shoulder but besides him, there was nobody.

 

*tap* *tap* *Tap* *TAP*

 

Again!  Fear was written all over his face. He almost lost his sanity. He started to run again, faster this time.

 

*TAP* *TAP* *TAP* *TAP* *TAP*

 

The sound was getting louder and the teenager realized that those noises were steps and belonged to a human being. Just like him.

 

Wait. Maybe the other's are still in here? No... I heard one pair of feet not two. Who is it? Weren't we supposed to be the only ones in here? 

 

He had to get out of here. Quickly. At a junction he stopped. Did I cut them off?

 

He turned around.

 

The hallway was eerie. It smelled bad and in every corner he saw disgusting vermin. Big eyes widened. Cold sweat ran down his spine. His hazelnut eyes caught a glimpse of a figure at the opposite end of the

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shawol81025
#1
Chapter 2: sequeeeeeel!!! i am so curious about everything!
ray79638 #2
Chapter 2: Yes please do a sequel!
spellunicorn
#3
Chapter 1: Creepy. Creepy. CREEPY. GOOD JOB AUTHOR T_T
imanma #4
OMIGOSH this is so spooky I got goosebumps. Thanks for writing this!
ErinIsaMess #5
Chapter 1: Ah, this was so good! What do you mean "didn't create horror atmosphere"? I, myself, am pretty freaked out. Might have a nightmare, who knows? Also, your English was very lovely~! I applaud your hard work. The story was enjoyed. Thank you~! <3
Jeezhi #6
Chapter 1: OMG what do you mean you failed making a horror atmosphere??? In my humble opinion I think you nailed it..I was curling my toes throughout the whole thing as if I was the one being chased.. damn it I shouln't have read this in my bd at night... kudos to you. It was good for being your first storie good job!!! <3
Seoulqueenka #7
Chapter 1: That was so good!!!!!!! I guess I have to wait for an update now!!!!!!!*hint* *hint*!!!!!!