Park Jimin
Description
"Hyung, when will you be here?"
"Just wait for me, okay?"
Jungkook misses no one more than Park Jimin,
and Jimin misses no one more than Jungkook.
All Jungkook has to do is wait until Jimin gets discharged.
Jeon Jungkook.
Park Jimin.
"Everything I've loved, became everything I've lost."
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REVIEWS:
"There are some minor errors that you still need to fix, but it isn't really noticeable by some readers tho. I find nothing wrong in the Description and the Foreword, no grammatical errors whatsoever. Though the Description is short and brief, it is enough to KILL ME WITH FEELZ show the plot.(ABOARD THE FEELZ TRAIN) (40/45)" -Traverse Review and Proofread
"Plot is not very original, but i liked it. The beginning was concise and clear and then things started to go haywire. The ending seems to be too much of a coincidence to be true. but for some reason, I liked it.I liked Jungkook's character. He seemed psychopathic and slightly too dependent on Jimin. (the part where he burned Jimin's albums because he got jealous was just-) but it made sense.i liked your story, but the angst was just too farfetched for me to feel. but you definitely have talent, and simply for the complexity of Jungkook's character, you get points here. (80.5/100)" -« ѕυвѕтαɴтια »
"It's quite difficult for me to judge this part seeing as your story is too brief and is only written from Jungkook's POV. However, I dislike Jungkook's character greatly. For one, his behavior threw me off greatly. With few corrections, I believe that this story could be more enjoyable.Your description is pretty crisp and brief and since there is no mistake whatsoever in the grammar department, there's not much for me to say." -Cosmos Review Shop (by SimplyHeartless)
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