Hunted

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Two years. The length of time Aaliya Keita was in a relationship with Jongin Kim. Well, until he disappeared without an explanation, leaving only a note and a bag of $20,000. His disappearance put Aaliya and her two sons on the hit list of the Family one of the most prolific crime syndicate in the US. 

Based on a dream I had.

Foreword

 

Prologue

   POV- Aaliyah Keita
2 years. 2 years we were in a relationship before he walked out the door with no explanation, just a note and a bag of $20,000. Where did he even get that much money? I try to think hard but I can't even think of what he does for a living. He works at that night club in downtown, I think. I am a terrible mom; I should know the answer to that question without any hesitation. I look over to where the pictures of me and my kids use to be. Who steals pictures?
 Four weeks ago I came home and the first thing I noticed was that all the family pictures were missing. I looked around the house noticed that all of his stuff was gone and  that he even took the knick knacks and pictures the boys had made for him. That is when I noticed the duffel bag and the  note.  The Note Read:

Liyah,
I am sorry but I had to leave. I can't keep coming home knowing that I am hurting you and the kids. I love you and I wish I could be with you right now but I can't.  I left some money to help with my absence. I hope one day soon you will forgive me and I can come and get you and the boys and we can live as a family.
 Saranghae Jagi,
Jong In

I had to tell the boys something but I couldn't  tell them that he just left. I told them that he had to go back to Korea for an emergency and that I did not now how long it would be before he would come back. We ate silently that night and it has been like that for the last month.  I walk them to school and I go to work. Nothing more, nothing less. It is like a big hole has been placed in our lives.

Status Update10/15/16
I am an college student and midterms are coming up, so I have been really busy. I have been working on the chapter but between school work and minor writers block, I haven't had a chance to finish it. Hopefully after midterms are over I will be able to take a break and to continue to write the chapter.  
P.S. don't forget to vote on an idea for the bonus chapter. 

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AFFOfficialAhjumma
#1
Chapter 11: This is good and I know school can soak up all your time. So we'll be here when you finish with midterms looking forward to your next update! Great job on your writing it's very entertaining. :)
AFFOfficialAhjumma
#2
Chapter 8: Girl, that's how you have a picnic! Them children is going to love him based on the food alone! Lol
AFFOfficialAhjumma
#3
Chapter 5: So kai was an orphan raised in an abusive home where all the people cared about was the money. Thank goodness he went to YMCA to learn how to dance and I'm glad they got out of there.
AFFOfficialAhjumma
#4
Chapter 3: So Jongin is using is Aka Kai name out in them streets. So she doesn't know who she's actually dating. mmm.....now he got her all caught up in his mess. Well, well I'm glad they were able to escape. I can't wait to see what happen next. ^^
AFFOfficialAhjumma
#5
Chapter 2: Oh no!!!!!!!!! Jongin is gone and now the family is kidnapped? What in the world is going on? I could see her out in the streets fighting to protect her babies. I got to read the next chapter. :)
AFFOfficialAhjumma
#6
Chapter 1: This is really cool! I like the setting and the suspense. It's caught my attention and I'm moving on to the next chapter. Great job so far! ^^
iiThinkPurplee
#7
Chapter 11: I'm in love with this story good luck with midterms :3
Sharo001
720 streak #8
Chapter 10: Definitely C. lol

Good luck with your midterms.
Lotuspassion #9
Chapter 9: Add more chapters please
Sharo001
720 streak #10
Chapter 8: Jongin was really ready for the picnic, I don't think I've ever seen so many food choices. lol The boys are adorable as well. Good update.