Komorebi

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Description

Imagine a world where every word you speak appears on your skin.

This is the story about Youngjae and Daehyun, the one who had said too much and the one who was too scared to speak.

Foreword

A little oneshot, originally posted for a fic challenge I participated in.

Please enjoy

 

Russian Translation by softlis!

 

Pairing(s): Daehyun/Youngjae
Content Notes: Romance - Emotional Conflict - Slightly Angst - Selfhate 

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Nana_208 #1
Chapter 1: Wahh this was so so good!! *while bawling my eyes out* Daehyun being the sweet little cutie pie that he is got me right in the feels! You portrayed Youngjae's emotions very well. I'm happy that Daehyun kept pushed to be by Youngjae's side to help him be able to see his internal beauty and external beauty. This seriously makes me so full of joy. The ending was just the happiest/cutest thing! ^_^ The meaning of this story was just extremely beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this story full of emotion, hope and angst. I really enjoyed reading this a lot. C:
P.S. Sorry if everything seems all over the place. I can never seem to be able to think straight after reading these magnificent pieces of work you put out. ♡♡♡
altosans
#2
Chapter 1: uh my heart .. it's hurt .. rly it was just so so so beautiful...
there so much love .. so so much love that it's hurt me !!
i love it i rly love it so much and i love the pain that i feelt .. thank you ♡
Moni_Mon #3
Chapter 1: OMG! I really love it! The way Daehyun changed YoungJae thoughts is beautiful. Your fic is a really meaninful story! It was absolutely beautiful!
ChyeahBAfrickenP
#4
Chapter 1: Such a beautiful story <3 I think there's already a comment suggesting this but, it would be really nice to know about Daehyun's side of the story too :))) Like why is he so quiet to begin with. Overall though, this is one of the most emotional one shot I've read. Thank you for the fic!
charismazico
#5
Chapter 1: I'm speechless .. this was beautiful. This made me cry, perhaps because I could relate to Youngjae. Not to mention that this makes you think about all those words you said and they are out there and will be forever, you can never take back what you said. What you said, what others said to you. It all stays in you and sometimes it's smothering you more than it should. But everyone should accept their past and if they can't do it alone they should let others help them, by replacing it with beautiful future. Everyone is Youngjae more or less, some are strong and independent and deal with it, and some need a little push, a person or some sorce of happiness that will give them strenght, reminder how beautiful and worth living they are no matter what. Honestly i wish this story was longer, i wish we found out about Daehyun's past, and also how Daejae actually became lovers, etc .. but this is a oneshot so it's understandable. Anyways, this story is really amazing in every single way, you have such a creative and beautiful mind. Thank you
BAPlover09 #6
Chapter 1: This is so lovely.. I think everyone who read this can relate to Youngjae. We have said things in our life that we do regret. Words that damages our reputation, relationship or even destroyed ourselves but that doesnt mean that it hold us back and keep us prison away from happiness that everyone deserve. You just showed us how LOVE can mead ourbroken selves and can act a sign to start again. This two creatures may have found a peaceful moment by the end of the story and I hope everyone who have read this as well .. We never know who is struggling with the same curse as what Youngjae have but I hope they realize that its never to late to love ourselves. Thank you specialguest another master piece.
dolphins94
#7
Chapter 1: This fic feels like salvation!!!
trymyluck #8
Chapter 1: why am i crying hard ???!! this is too much. .ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ perfect story ♥♥♥♥♥ beautiful♥♥♥♥ i love you so.muchㅠㅠㅠ
bexbunny #9
Ohhh my god this is so gorgeous. I have to admit I had tears in my eyes. This kind of relationship and acceptance is something we all want for ourselves, so I found myself relating to Youngjae quite profoundly. So beautiful honey, thank you~