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Review
First impression [3/5] : It's a lot lot lot lot lot better than your previous request, however, I still have some things I would like to talk about in this poster.
Font [6.5/10] : Somehow, the title looks weird? The color isn't really nice and did you use this font as well for the previous picture? Making the 't' and 'm' connect doesn't look nice, somehow, with that kind of thin-ish font. Maybe try another font? Also, behind the font it's all plainly black, and the font color is a dark, ,thin, unclear green, that it's not also totally noticeable for me.
Mood [10/15] : Other than the title, it doesn't look horror? For me, personally, it looks more like gory, somehow. It does look slightly angsty, though.
Coloring [5.5/10] : I am sorry, but I think I don't really like it. (but again it's just a personal opinion so). The coloring somehow looks so disgusting and unpleasing to the eyes, although, thanks for not making the contrast really jasdjkadhkajsd. The brown-ish blood-ish brush, I personally don't like the color.
Placement [8/10] : The placement is pretty fine for me, not gonna say a lot here.
Blending [10/15] : What's those white lines around Tiffany's face? The poster looks like it's barely blended, however, it's been so much better than the previous one. I really think I am slightly blind??? that I still think the gory blood-ish brush is not sharp at all, like it's badly stretched.
Resources [14/20] : Not a lot to say, I don't really like the brush.
Overall look [10/15]
Total score: 3+6.5+10+5.5+8+10+14+10 = 67/100
Personal comment: First of all, I am sorry if it is too harsh or it's an inaccurate review o/ Wheee I would love to congratulate you since it's been better, a lot! However, always remember that there is a lot room for improvement, okay? Thank you for requesting here! -asdfghjm15
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