Chapter 12: I really lik it its really a rare kind of stories so in the end they died? I personlly think that the only one that could save us GOD and our self don't know about you.

Chapter 12: i ever read about a monkey and a fish...
from there i learnt that what we called save...could be has a different meaning to other person...

Chapter 12: i ever read about a monkey and a fish...
from there i learnt that what we called save...could be has a different meaning to other person...

Chapter 12: This is truly an interesting read from start to finish. Aside from the searching cycle of each other, it also, to me I realize as I read now (as it's imho, although yes this is more of forgetting/being blinded in the process of searching for happiness along the way), progresses through a simplified-in-words kind of cycle of loving, because in liking you love, and when you love the next best thing really is to hate, right? And it /ends/ at death precariously. This kind of love, it's simply dark but really, it's still love no matter what.
The open ending is a nice touch. I personally chose "kill" even if I hoped in a lower voice it be "save" because the way things were going on "you quit me" seems so much a big change if it were to result to "you save me" - or maybe it's the pessismistic me, but here's what I think.
I got confused, curious and intrigued to everything, and I think this really is memorable and a personal fave. Glad I found this. :')

Chapter 12: Omg which four letter word?! O_o

I really liked I _____ you so here I am! Haha

Chapter 10: reminds me about a story told about two males and a mirror house...a tendency we had unconsciously...

Chapter 9: OMG I love this so much!! Your writing is really good and detailed and I love the way you laid out the story!!
Everything about this story is so good <3 ^

So, I saw this because the title is really creative and the ones I thought of (because I feel like I should share this idk)
Are love, hate, have, and want
I didn't know there were so many for letter verbs for that sentence like call and such. AND THIS IS ASEEQQQUUUEEELLLL!?!?!
yay. More for me

congrats on winning the bid :)