I know I said I would update soon, but I kinda didn't read my books for honors english and then i had band camp, but i'll finish it next saturday i promise!!
Chapter 3: I'm laughing so hard that you deem the other characters 'the oldies' XDD.
I appreciate the little tid bits of characters in this chapter. Jimin's panic at the sight of Yuri was perfect. And Namjoon hitting his head? Perfect. :D I'm looking forward to what else you get these kids into~!
Chapter 3: ah i loved this first chapter !! you threw in the scene with the yoga balls which is hilarious, and aunt hyo teasing jimin was so cute. i can't wait to find out what the surprise is !!
Chapter 3: firstly, ajdkfhdh sorry this comment is late, life is getting hectic : ( mian.
Kyori's mom is the cutest, wow. Was totally expected her to threaten to suffocate them with one of the yoga balls while chasing them out of her yoga studio- ok, but then again, tae and miyeon seem to be a playful pair. cute.
"TAEHYUNG AND MIYEON WERE PLAYING WITH BALLS." akdjfkdkdj i think i choked-
NAMJOON OH GOD AJSJFKDKDJS do i pity the bus or do i pity him, istg
+++ JIMIN AND TAE HAHAHAH TAE'S JUST BEING ALL CASUAL LEAVING JIMIN TO SUFFER IN SILENCE, AW. Poor kid.
Yuri too ! Fashionably late, that's my girl < 3
This chapter was a great start : " ) ah, what kind of antics would the crew get up to on this trip. Lowkey wORRIED for them and their sanity tbh HAHAHAH.
Chapter 2: Oh my goodness these are so cute. I can't even. All the names on the hovers were priceless. IRL Prince Charming, ZzzzZZzzzz...LOL. Can't wait to see more of this and YAY you're writing! :D
Chapter 2: I'm so happy this is literally the best thing ever ashhghj and that phone layout is so cute !! i'm so excited for this honestly i'm shaking !!
omg yay! i was waiting for this!
first off, thanks for choosing uisa!! i wasn't expecting it and it caught me off guard lol
askjhas the message miyeon sent to uisa, i'm die!! that m,ade me laugh
as well as taerhyung cutting his hair at 2 am and miyeon NOT replying for like hours
friday goes off, i don't know what jimin's talking about.
i'm also the creepy janitor
the layout is really cute too! also unrealistic b/c who has their phone charged that much? LMAO
Chapter 2: what the heck was taehyung thinking to cut his bangs at 2:15am in the morning- LIVING ON THE EDGE RIGHT THERE. HAHAHAHA.
the format of this prologue's really cute tbh, I really enjoyed reading it ! THE CONTACT NAMES THOUGH, MIYEON, OMFG HAHAHAHA. Can't wait for the first chapter, and good luck on writing it. Ah, we all know how y it feels to have a writer's block so it's all good, and considering the fact that this amazing prologue came out of it, claps claps.
+ oh yea- i almost forgot, thanks for choosing yuri, holy , amazing. congrats to the others who got chosen too ! ! !! !!
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