Chapter 1: This is awesome! I love the dynamics of their relationship; it's so natural. At the beginning it seems like Minho's gonna be an , but it turns out that Tae's not a perfect little angel either. I love how they fight about /not/ having money instead of the typical you-buy-me-too-many-fancy- kinda fight. It's realistic and natural and well-written. I love it.
One thing, though, you might want to work on the spacing and enter, so it'd be easier to read^^
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