The Cigarettes Smoke

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Description

Normally Minghao wakes up when his nightmare gets worse

Foreword

This was a part of the Chr17mas ficfest on tumblr! :)

But I decided to post it here as well, cause why not.

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Evelyn-Everdeen
#1
Chapter 1: This was such a rollercoaster of emotions... This is so well written!

I like how we found out more and more about Minghao's past as time goes by. Jun's roll in this is so nice and calming and I'm so glad that he's by Minghao's side, their relationship is so sweet!

I feel a little sorry for Mingyu. He's trying so hard and yet Minghao just can't open up to him...

Minghao seems to have serious issues, though! Then again, with the past he has, I guess it's also understandable that he seems to only know this one way to let out his frustrations and anger...

The smoking taboo seems kind of senseless to me... If Jun smokes inside anyways, he might as well just let Minghao smoke from the very beginning! And no matter how much I hate people smoking, it's good that it at least seems to help Minghao here.

Thank you for the wonderful oneshot!
SeraphimEris
#2
Chapter 1: oMYGHAD NOOOOO ;-----; IT CAN'T END LIKE THIS. WHERE'S MY HAPPY ENDING?!! AUTHOR NIM YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS, OPEN UR LOCATION AND FITE MEEEEEE щ(゜ロ゜щ) GYUHAO IS ALL ABOUT HAPPY ENDS, WHY YOU DO THIS TO ME ಥ_ಥ I'M SUING YOU FOR HURTING ME THIS WAY! I'M SUING YOU--- lol jk, thank you very much for writing this gem. Love ya /send broken finger hearteu/ I'm still suing you thou :(
hzitao324 #3
Chapter 1: NOOOOOO, I WANT IT TO BE LONGER XD
niehaunt #4
Chapter 1: Hi, can I translate this into Vietnamese? Of course, with full credit
Gryazar #5
Chapter 1: Hi! Can I translate this in Italian on whattpad? I love this so much and I really want to share it with Italian Carats
YeojaChinguXX #6
Chapter 1: Write more GyuHao
Mochiminmin98 #7
Hi author, I very like this shot. Can I translate it to Vietnamese? I"ll write full create
byungsxx #8
Chapter 1: ITS SO BEAUTIFUL AAAKKKHH.
wowsuga
#9
Chapter 1: Wow, this was really good. I don't see fics like this very often and when I do I'm really glad because they're always the best ones
cgao753 #10
Chapter 1: </333 AWWWW MINGHAOOOO NOOOOO BABY NOOOOOO omgomgomg like how beautiful is this
i see mingyu x minghao and junhui x junghan are ur fav ships dear author XD
ughhhh SUCH ANGST THOOOOO man so beautiful i can't even <3 tears are forming ughhhhhhh
thanks for this wonderful fic!!!! i'd love a continuation (if u ever feel like it :D); something about this whole setup thing intrigues me