One Shot at My Heart

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“Are you sure you’ll be happy when you’re in US?” Joy asked Jimin. Jimin had made up her mind to leave all bad memories behind. It had been hard for her all this while facing the loving couple in front of her.

“Are you sure you have to do this?” Sunggyu asked Jimin. He could no longer hide his feeling for her. Seeing her in hurt, it didn’t go well for him as well.

Foreword

hai guys...

honestly this is my first try in writing one-shot...i'm not sure how it will end up...

all kind of feelings are mixed up in my heart and mind...><

anyway, i do hope you guys will like it...

and most of all, i wish to thank my colleague, izwandy (my company's designer) for giving me the first poster for my story , even though it's simple, but he helped me for FOC...(looks like i'm going to buy you lunch for that ^^)

noe it's time to credit Babe from  for making the new one!!!

comments are very much welcome...XD

and yea, i've decided to take part in 

♦ summer fairy ♦

a writing contest

 

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GreenAppleL #1
Chapter 1: Love your story unnie.It's sad but this story is great.
kaywuu #2
Chapter 1: Poor Jimin! But luckily Sunggyu was there for her. T,T
And Joy although she had a boyfriend already, she shouldn't left her bestfriend. Huhu
kxdlola120 #3
Chapter 1: I have been in a situation like this, but it didn't end nicely. I'm glad that there are people who could look beyond out flaws, and accept us the way we deserve. Thank you for writing this, it helped me to bring back the faith in love a bit :D
WoodWitchofSuburbia #4
Chapter 1: Aw, this was actually a cute little oneshot. I like this idea that, even though your first love might not work out, there could be someone even better waiting for you. And what do you mean you aren't good at descriptions, I think you do well enough with the vocabulary you have! You'll get better, it just takes practice ~
kim_inspirit #5
Chapter 1: This story memang jjang unnie . Hahaha , a bit sad . But it's okay... Fighting
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