Chapter 8: hello and heys! i send my greeting to all (why am i crazy again?) lol , i am not a great bts fan..but i like them tho, and i love jikook!!!(no offence to anyone) i am an i got7 and i main ship is markson! yay! anyway, (serious stuff) i write stories too, and (no offence) noticed that you might need help? well i am offering it, you can take it or (bling) let go. so, i think you honestly need to make the chapters long, cuz they are too short and you are updating sooooo awfully slow(sorry for my honestly, tryin to help) so long chapters, between them a long time thats fair i guess, right? second, u should explain more, and make sure to let people understand who is talking to who (am i the only one, who gets confused? maybe but should too) you should explain further more, say more stuff explain more things about whats going on, who is going, who is coming, where they are doing, anything just explain (you know what i mean right?) the whole thing is talking(characters talking to one another). you might ask, how do i make it longer, it's what i said secondly, when u explain more, you write more meaning it will get longer. another help is that you can read other people's stories, the more you read the more you can write, the more expressions you add which follows that your story will be better(personal experience) you are welcome to read my stories to know what i mean (you don't really have to) they can explain what i mean, they are not perfect tho. don't give up on this story, i sure you can do it, if you need any help ask me! i would like to help! :) (if you even read this) i apologize it's too long..sowwwy :p

Chapter 6: Wow you're Canadian!!! My horse riding coach is Canadian too!! i'm a welsh- Australian. love your story so far keep up the good work!!!

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Oh you're a Canadian well I'm a Filifiniana lol nah I'm from a Philippines a Filifina Citizen. I have a harsh life here.


Omo update! I want more >♡<

Chapter 5: Uuuupdate >◇<

Chapter 5: Cant wait for Vmin to make Kookie jealous!! ^^
Please write a lot of Vmin scene bcoz i'm a vmin trash(sorry..hehe)
I'm excited! This is interesting <3

Chapter 4: love this. can't wait for the next update. literally cant wait for jealous kook

Chapter 4: this is so good ,i like your story ,plizzzz update soon ^_^

I really dont get where this is going to be honest :/ I liked the description. So much. But I cant quite get the chapters a bit. Still waiting for the vmin making kookie jealous part tho :) So yeah, please update soon ^_^ I actually loved the plot

Chapter 1: Absolutely jiminiie.. we love who you really are, jimin the angel, jimin the pure kind hearted, the energetic jimin, and youthful jimin..
Update soon..