Chapter 1: you deserve an upvote for working hard and writing a fic thats not in your native language ^u^ i also like the plot it is indeed very fluffy! however you really should ask someone to beta to help you correct the mistakes (but i understand it's completely up to you so you can do whatever you want with your own story!) good luck on writing more in the future :>

Chapter 1: Cute story. Liked the plot. Just one thing. Grammar and spelling. There were several mistakes like "when they went buy the store" it should be "by" things like that. Hope I didn't offend you? ^.^

That's so cute