Everybody Makes Mistakes

Description

Seohyun is 10 years old, Yoona and Sooyoung are 11 years old. They're still young and can sometime make mistakes. When they get in trouble, their unnie, Taeyeon is in charge of disciplining them. The way she disciplines them is one that will make sure they remember not to make the same mistake again. One that will probably keeps their butts sore for a whole day. WARNING: This contains spanking of young idols.

Foreword

'Sup guys. This is my first story. I hope it it isn't too bad, and PLEASE if I make a mistake or you want me to add in somethings PLEASE comment in the comment section below. Thanks guys!

ALSO, TONS OF CREDIT TO teddy1008 FOR GIVING ME AWESOME IDEAS AND HELPING ME MAKE THIS STORY!!!!

Comments

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ssnsdfx #1 Feb 19, 2016 03:34:23

Authornim pls post your story I'm really looking forward to read it

ssnsdfx #2 Jan 25, 2016 03:38:39

Pls start posting your stories

ssnsdfx #3 Jan 25, 2016 03:37:24

I like it pls continue

teddy1008 #4 Dec 21, 2015 21:36:08

Hey there, sorry I couldn't comment any earlier. For some reason your story wouldn't show up until now. I think you have a good start. Even if you don't get a lot of subscriptions or comments, it's okay, just continue. They'll turn out really good and people will like them a lot. Trust me, I know. :)

I'm sorry for pointing out any mistakes in the foreword, but it's better hearing it from gentle words than harsh ones like flames. 'They're still young and can sometime make mistakes', you should add an 's' to 'sometime'. 'One that will probably keeps their butts sore for a whole day', take out the 's' from 'keep'. I think that's it, which isn't bad. Trust me, when I first started my summaries were horrible XD I think you have a good start. I'll subscribe and read and give feedback if you want some. Thanks again!

~teddy1008