Lovin' It

Description

The first thing Jimin noticed was a head of messy black hair that most definitely didn't belong to Taehyung. He was about to apologize when he looked at the boy's face, instantly recognizing those sharp eyes and soft lips. His heart clenched tightly in his chest as he stood face to face with that strange guy from the McDonald's, who was staring back at him with a rather irritated expression.
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This a Jikook AU romantic comedy of sorts. Where Jimin takes a second job to pay his college tuition and shenanigans ensue. ^^
 
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Title: Lovin' It
 
Rating: PG13 for language
 
Pairing: Jikook
 
Disclaimer: This story contains guys liking other guys, making out with guys etc. There is no butt hence the PG rating, but there may be some cursing and what not. Don't like it, don't read it. The back button is your friend. I don't own any rights to BTS, just their merchandise. I already preordered a Suga hiphop monster doll because Suga is my spirit animal! No 's given.

Foreword

 
Author's Note:
So I joined the BTS Secret Santa on a whim, eventhough I don't have a bunch of free time this time of year, but I've never written from a prompt before so I thought I'd give it a try. Then I got the prompt to write anything but Namjin and that was it. Now I know the person was probably just trying to make it easy (unlike super specific pain's in the like me) but I was left trying to figure out what I should do with only 15 days to write a decent story. I decided on a Jikook since they're pretty popular and while bouncing ideas around with Miss Maize I came up with this story of them meeting at McDonald's under interesting circumstances. I want everyone to know this is not a troll fic, but just a funny little love story. I hope you enjoy. ^^ And to the person who gets this story for xmas, I'm sorry if it's not quite what you expected, but I hope you'll like it anyway. *fingers crossed*
 
 
Special Thanks:
To Shandcorn: For making my title card.  
To MissMaize: For the proofing reading this and helping me brainstorming with me eventhough all your ideas . Except maybe the grafitti one, you can definately write that. ^^
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kay6661 #1
Chapter 1: Wow this story..just..I'm lovin it too. Lol.
It is seriously funny, well I did laughing alone in my dark room at 5 in the morning reading this (what am I doing with my life?!). And jungkook's horrifying McDonald stories are just gold! Hahaa.
I was reading your Officially Yours and I knew I like your writing style right away. Hope you'll make another jikook story author-nim ^^
Amalya #2
Hey there! I know this isn't labeled as a comedy but it certainly comes off that way at times so I submitted this story to the 2016 World of Literature Fanfiction Awards for Best Comedy. ^_^ It doesn't hurt that you put shenanigans in the description. ;) hehe
Amalya #3
Chapter 1: Bahaha! Two parts of this made me laugh out loud for real, and that rarely happens. A) When Jungkook kissed Jimin and I immediately realized he was going to have that horrid, red face paint makeup stuff on and B) when Jungkook came up with the CPR line in record time. XD Touche!

But admittedly, bizarre and a little frustrating because Jimin just wouldn't 'man up' as it were, this was quite a delightful read. I liked how you portrayed him as working two jobs to get through school (the struggle is real!) and how Jungkook fled his dorm to get work done (at first). I guess a place with free WiFi certainly makes sense. ;) heh And it's no joke that his morbid stories were quite entertaining; I just never pictured him as having that sort of sense of humor. It was fun though.

I also liked that little 4D reference with Taehyung. haha Nice add in there. I was absolutely satisfied when Jimin was finally outed and at Taehyung's persistent matchmaking indeed. That last scene with him 'pretending' to try and keep Jimin out was quite entertaining. ;) And their making up and finally becoming a couple was quite cute as well. Definitely happy to have that happy ending as well as that last picture caption too! It was a great way to end the story.

I'm almost surprised that Jungkook wouldn't have recognized Jimin's voice sooner, but I do suppose since they really had met only that one time, it might have been a bit hard to place. haha Great job and I hope your giftee enjoyed this!
Manduu #4
Chapter 1: This was so cute :3 Oh, i love your stories
NisaMinzel #5
Chapter 1: This fic is so cute, seriously <3
soamazingifnt7 #6
Chapter 1: this is sooo cute :x jikook is my happiness lately and this amazing fic is my everything!!
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